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 Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2005 10:27 am
Save your breath.
Dont speak.Not even a word.
Be quick.Be quiet.
He'll hear you.
He knows.He knows your here.
Get Ready.
Once you see red.
You'll scream.
You'll fall.
You will regret not shutting your mouth.
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Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2005 10:29 am
I am lay in the darkness.
Waiting for you.
Waiting for you to turn your back.
Silently I unsheath my blade to slit your neck.
I see your blood pour onto the floor.
Then your body goes limp.
I am the Angel Of Apocalypse
Never blink,it may be your last.
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Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2005 10:30 am
Look up.Look down.Feel all around.
Anywhere you touch is padded.
Once your lights are turned out.
Notice the darkness.
Notice it as it engulfs you.
Notice it when your laying there in a pool of blood
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Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2005 10:32 am
You captured my heart
All you did was throw it away
Watch me cry
Watch me fall
Watch me break
All you ever did was just watch
Now im gone
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Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2005 10:34 am
Let your dreams be your pillow, and your emotions a blanket, close your eyes and say goodnight.Nothing can hurt you
You have no experienced all my crappy poems. Those are all the ones I feel suited for gaia wink
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Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2005 10:35 am
TheTwistdBlakCat Let your dreams be your pillow, and your emotions a blanket, close your eyes and say goodnight.Nothing can hurt you You have no experienced all my crappy poems. Those are all the ones I feel suited for gaia wink *applauds* I liked them. 3nodding
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Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2005 10:36 am
Briskfire TheTwistdBlakCat Let your dreams be your pillow, and your emotions a blanket, close your eyes and say goodnight.Nothing can hurt you You have no experienced all my crappy poems. Those are all the ones I feel suited for gaia wink *applauds* I liked them. 3nodding Heh thank you heart
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Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2005 10:39 am
Your poems are awesome. heart
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Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2005 10:42 am
Im not sure if this is suited but I will post it. If anyone finds anything against it I will edit or delete.
Im ready and willing
Ready to go
Ready to die
Ready to leave this life
Ready to breakdown
Ready for it all to end
Turn me Off, I'll be so much more happier
Take me out,Nothing is worth this
Drop me in the water,hold me down
Load the gun,Put a bullet through my skull
Kill me please
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Not sure If I posted thids one before
I wish I didnt have a heart,I wouldnt feel the pain
I scream so loud That i would just shatter
Lies Tied And Tears Spilled
Blood Shed and Life lost
The Plans Were in play all along
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Again I don't know if this is suited
4th of July
Flick the match
Light the fuse
And Run
Watch it fly
Listen to the noise
Watch them burn
Let them scream
Touch the ashes
Let the wind carry them away
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Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2005 10:47 am
In another land,
Across the blue sea,
There live a girl
Who is very dear to me.
This girl that I speak of
Is special to me.
And as I continue,
I think you will see.
She is the love of my life,
And so much more,
But now she is gone;
Gone to that distant shore.
So I will wait here,
Right here I will stay.
And wait for that girl
To return to me someday.
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Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2005 1:07 pm
To the depth of the soul
The hurt journeys deep.
No longer as a whole
Can a person's heart keep.
The pain reveals the flaws,
The mistakes and the errors.
Digging deep with its claws,
Erasing the cares.
The soul is invaded
By an unblockable force,
And life is pervaded
By the pain and remorse.
And though life was replaced
By that unbearable pain,
It slowly can be faced;
Can be lived once again.
Yet while life goes on,
And the pain seems to end,
The hurt is not gone,
Such wounds never truely mend.
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Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2005 2:09 pm
The darkness calls,
The daylight ends.
As twilight falls,
The day's pain mends.
No longer the light
That prolongs the pain.
Replaced by night,
Enveloped by rain.
The quiet breeze
In the darkest hour
A gentle tease
Of potential power.
The rain falls down,
Falls in the dark,
Erasing the frown,
The painrful mark.
Night slowly leaves
With the sun's first ray
The calm of the eve
Replaced by the day.
The dawn breaks the silence
The night ripped apart,
Releasing the violence
Once the the twilight parts.
But fear not the sun
Or the daylight when
Though the day has begun,
The night will come again.
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Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2005 3:07 pm
The fire burns
Without, within
As it spurns
Humanities sins.
It rages through
The violent soul
One thing to do,
Destroy the whole.
No water can extinguish
The might of the blaze
Produced by such anguish
That burns through the haze
Of memories past
Yet still remembered
And the fire spreads fast
Sparked by the embers
That quietly smolder
In the depths of the mind
The impartial holder
Of thoughts of the kind
That enrage, that hate,
That burn, that boil,
That anger, that bait,
That betray, that spoil,
That twist the spirit
And perverts the life
Of those who are near it
Who are controlled by the strife
And still refuse to change
And inflict pain on us all
Who deserve to be hanged
And from life's embrace fall.
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Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2005 4:02 pm
Okay, I can't write anymore, my creativity's used up for the day.
Someone else will have to take over.
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Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2005 4:29 pm
Briskfire Okay, I can't write anymore, my creativity's used up for the day. Someone else will have to take over. you did all that in one day? eek
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