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 Posted: Wed Nov 15, 2006 1:46 pm
Yes!Perfect Title! I love it! <3
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Posted: Wed Nov 15, 2006 2:29 pm
Glad ya liked it.. I wonder what Sasuke would be like when he finds a poem made by his loved one Sakura?
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Posted: Wed Nov 15, 2006 3:43 pm
Kiss it and hug it and lick it and frame it and gaze at it Probably toss it in the trash. >.<
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Posted: Wed Nov 15, 2006 3:56 pm
He'd most likely do just that.. Perhaps he would read it? And then throw it away..
Dreams ~ A poem in perspective of Sasuke's Hopeful Return
They say "Follow your heart,
and dreams will come true."
If that's true,
Why has it led me here?
In the midst of
sweet memories?
I breathe in the air,
so familer yet cold.
This is where it began,
and where it will end.
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Posted: Wed Nov 15, 2006 3:58 pm
I loved that one. <33
Hopefully. xD
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Posted: Wed Nov 15, 2006 5:09 pm
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Posted: Wed Nov 15, 2006 5:20 pm
Bring Back The Sun, Bring Back The Moon, Bring Back Him
I would rather you bring back the Sun than those clouds.
I would rather it warm my spirits than continue watching them drown.
I would rather you bring back him than the Sun.
I would rather see his face, his hair, those eyes than have the memories drift away.
Bring Back the Moon for me, bring back the stars.
Take away the dark.
Bring back my hopes, my dreams
And let me forget my fears.
Bring back my Sasuke-Kun,
Just as I saw him last.
Forget the sun, the moon, the stars
Just bring him back to my arms.
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Posted: Wed Nov 15, 2006 6:35 pm
this is kinda in Sakura pov
i dont have a title =/
always and forever may your spirit be by my side
these feelings that i have for you i could never ever hide
even now that you have left us i still remember those days
when you catch me looking at you how my blush would never fade
i hope that one day maybe you would come back again
putting a smile on my face and making my heart dance
just remember, my dear - no matter where you are
i'll look after you like you once did for me with all my heart.
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Posted: Thu Nov 16, 2006 4:29 am
Hey.. Hey! You two.. Those are good... Atleast all of Gaia can't see this... Right?
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Posted: Thu Nov 16, 2006 12:16 pm
xD True, I think we'd all be scared of major flames. >.<
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Posted: Thu Nov 16, 2006 1:37 pm
My goodness. I leave this thread for about a day, and what happens?
So many poems already. Squee! heart I knew this was a good idea.
Okay, here I go. *taps mic* Hello? Testing...
Here's a poem based on this one doujin picture I got. I put the poem on the picture, printed it out, now, it's on my binder notebook. And I get to read it when I'm bored out of my mind in school.
If you can't see it, here are the words:
Moment
A glimpse was captured
of our moment together.
A single droplet of time
held in gentle hands like
a sparkling diamond.
A glance and a smile-
it was ours.
The connection of
our very souls.
A memory was formed in a moment's glance.
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Posted: Thu Nov 16, 2006 4:07 pm
That's too cute. <3 ::fangirling::
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Posted: Thu Nov 16, 2006 4:26 pm
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Posted: Thu Nov 16, 2006 9:27 pm
Procrastination/Imagination really does wonders, especially when you're writing it fifteen minutes before class. whee
Keep in mind that I made these in three years ago.
Hers
At the distance, I see you
Eyes like fire
Itching to fight
Eyes like ice
Remembering that night...
I try to help you, but
You push me away
I ask you why, but
You wouldn't say
My tears, an overflowing river,
Blur your last smile
Your last words to me
Has my mind in denial...
"Thank you..."
His
I close my eyes,
Shutting myself from the fire
Away from the lies
Pain, anger, and desire
I cover my ears,
Deaf to your cries
Away from your fears
Grief and hopes that died
You call out my name
I turn to look at you
You say your feelings will always stay the same
Your pleas grew
You’ve broken my walls,
Washed away my fears
When I fall
I see your tears
It’s been a while since, I felt free
Pain is gone
Loneliness is dead
Apathy flees
I open my eyes,
Seeing what I haven’t seen for a while
Relief, Happiness
And your bright smile…
Your smile grew
Remembering those words I once said to you
So long ago, I say them now…
“Thank You…”
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Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 2:37 am
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