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Do you like it?
  ZOMG IT'S AMAZING!- for GMC
  Maybe..
  It's alright
  Yes
  No (you guys make me emo but your opinion is your opinion)
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lHelixl

PostPosted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 7:53 pm


What I see up to the part where Adrian invites her Atalya I think it is right now up to the castle. My other screen is kinda dark right now so that's all I say I didn't notice it was green if it was ... is that the ending??

On a side note if I missed something by all means please feel free to call me a total idiot and direct me to the ending and if it was the ending CLIFF HANGER baby I wonder how what would happen fi eh actually went to see her daughter ... ( I feel like such a retarded n00b that needs to get roflstomped right now)
PostPosted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 5:02 am


I have an ending, but I haven't posted it yet. sad
Sorry for the confusion.


Tei, it's not.
But I wanted someone to die in this story, but then I'd start crying. sad

Ebony Beauty


J Foxfire

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PostPosted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 12:03 pm


I'm enjoying your story so far. I like it very much.
PostPosted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 12:55 pm


eek Ich liebe.
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I can't wait for the end!

Queen.Cellophane


Ebony Beauty

PostPosted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 1:12 pm


Thankies you guys! heart

The ending was kid of weak, but that was why I wanted to make an alternative ending too.
PostPosted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 4:43 pm


I'm running out of colors. sad

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PostPosted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 5:21 pm


I just got finished the orange part. It's really good so far!
PostPosted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 5:24 pm


Thankyou GMC! 4laugh


I'll wait to add the last two sections until your done.

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PostPosted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 5:33 pm


No, don't wait! I'm done red now! It's really good!

I don't want to make everyone wait.
PostPosted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 5:36 pm


It's alright!

I want all my loved readers to be on the same part and suspense is the best part of a story! heart

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PostPosted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 5:40 pm


I'm finished now.

Post post post post pleaaaaaaaase.
PostPosted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 5:42 pm


I don't know..
Maybe we should wait until everyone else says they want the ending.


Kidding.. I'll do it.. well the almost last half.

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PostPosted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 5:45 pm


OH NOES! YAY!

And you should add the poll option "ZOMG IT'S AMAZING!" so I can vote that.
PostPosted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 5:49 pm


heart The new part.

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Ebony Beauty

PostPosted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 5:53 pm


Alright, I'll add it just for you. xD heart heart And thanks! There is an epilogue though!
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