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Posted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 7:53 pm
What I see up to the part where Adrian invites her Atalya I think it is right now up to the castle. My other screen is kinda dark right now so that's all I say I didn't notice it was green if it was ... is that the ending??
On a side note if I missed something by all means please feel free to call me a total idiot and direct me to the ending and if it was the ending CLIFF HANGER baby I wonder how what would happen fi eh actually went to see her daughter ... ( I feel like such a retarded n00b that needs to get roflstomped right now)
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Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 5:02 am
I have an ending, but I haven't posted it yet. sad Sorry for the confusion.
Tei, it's not. But I wanted someone to die in this story, but then I'd start crying. sad
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Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 12:03 pm
I'm enjoying your story so far. I like it very much.
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Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 12:55 pm
eek Ich liebe. heart I can't wait for the end!
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Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 1:12 pm
Thankies you guys! heart
The ending was kid of weak, but that was why I wanted to make an alternative ending too.
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Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 4:43 pm
I'm running out of colors. sad
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Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 5:21 pm
I just got finished the orange part. It's really good so far!
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Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 5:24 pm
Thankyou GMC! 4laugh
I'll wait to add the last two sections until your done.
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Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 5:33 pm
No, don't wait! I'm done red now! It's really good!
I don't want to make everyone wait.
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Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 5:36 pm
It's alright!
I want all my loved readers to be on the same part and suspense is the best part of a story! heart
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Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 5:40 pm
I'm finished now.
Post post post post pleaaaaaaaase.
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Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 5:42 pm
I don't know.. Maybe we should wait until everyone else says they want the ending.
Kidding.. I'll do it.. well the almost last half.
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Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 5:45 pm
OH NOES! YAY!
And you should add the poll option "ZOMG IT'S AMAZING!" so I can vote that.
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Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 5:49 pm
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Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 5:53 pm
Alright, I'll add it just for you. xD heart heart And thanks! There is an epilogue though!
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