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Science Infinity Vice Captain
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 Posted: Thu Nov 13, 2008 6:21 pm
That would probably be a colon or a semicolon...
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Posted: Fri Nov 14, 2008 8:02 am
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Science Infinity Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Nov 20, 2008 12:38 pm
Ooh, ooh! Teacher, teacher! Pick me, pick me teacher! I have another homonym! Rain, Reign, and rein!!!! Yay!( blaugh arrow question burning_eyes ) Rain means the stuff that falls from the sky! Reign is a period of power! And rein is the bridle on horses that you pull to make them go somewhere!
Person that used rain:
Stupid rain. I can't go outside because of it!
Person that used reign:
Muhahahahahahaha... I am the most powerful therefore, I shall reign over the entire empire! Bwahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!
Person that used rein:
MOMMY, MOMMY THE REIN ON THE HORSE BURNED ME, MOMMY, MOMMY!!!
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Posted: Sun Nov 23, 2008 8:49 am
I vote to kick him out of this thread, that last one was annoying...
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Science Infinity Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Nov 23, 2008 9:23 am
But I'm am the scholar! *Spells "pie" on test as "peye"*
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Posted: Thu Nov 27, 2008 7:20 am
No thread, don't die!!! So now what? The forum is gonna die if we don't kill it or make it be alive! Who's with me to help the environment?!?
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Posted: Sat Nov 29, 2008 1:07 pm
I'm all for helping the environment! OK, it's time for public humiliation time, yes, I'm a horrible person. Alcolyte-dracolius Azure watched them leave before he continued hes aimless travelling "where should we go?" Ob looked at azure "according to my data, which is very limited, i suggest we head to a deserted area, like a empty town or village, and live there." ob said as he floated abit
correct the mistakes for a Jolly Rancher!
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Posted: Sat Nov 29, 2008 3:25 pm
Ooooooooooooooooooooh!!111!!1 ME TURN TEACHER!!!!!!!!!
Azure: Mistakes: his spelled incorrectly, corrected; no punctuation after incorrectly spelled traveling(corrected); no capitalization of "w" in word Where in quote.
Ob: Mistakes: A in Azure not capitalized; A in According(in quotations) not capitalized; I not capitalized(in quotes); a before empty incorrect, should be an; "O" in Ob(after quotation) not capitalized; abit incorrect, should be a bit; no punctuation after incorrect "abit".
Jolly rancher question dramallama rofl
((... 300TH POST!!!!!1!!!1!11!!!!!!!1!!!11!ONE!!!!11!11!11!!!!ELEVEN!!!!1!1!11))
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Posted: Sat Nov 29, 2008 10:51 pm
*Throws you a Jolly Rancher candy* Dive for it!
Great job, keep it up with the posting!
Original:
Azure watched them leave before he continued hes aimless travelling "where should we go?"
Ob looked at azure "according to my data, which is very limited, i suggest we head to a deserted area, like a empty town or village, and live there." ob said as he floated abit
Corrected:
Azure watched them leave before he continued his aimless traveling. "Where should we go?"((he asked)) <- optional
Ob looked at azure. "According to my data, which is very limited, I suggest we head to a deserted area, like a empty town or village, and live there," Ob said as he floated a bit.
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Posted: Sun Nov 30, 2008 4:45 am
Actually, your corrected version forgot to capitalize the "a" in Azure and was incorredt in saying "a empty" instead of "an empty".
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Science Infinity Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Dec 22, 2008 3:49 pm
Um... Hello? Hey, I have an idea! Everybody, go to the Games and Contests sub forum to play a game that's like a sub-division of this! Go now! Before I must DESTROY YOU ALL!!!
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Posted: Sat Dec 27, 2008 6:44 pm
^ I second that notion and I think I shall head there now.
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Posted: Sat Dec 27, 2008 7:06 pm
I have a question that I usualy have trouble with. Does the comma go before or after 'because'?
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Posted: Sun Dec 28, 2008 11:56 am
usually before... but it kinda depends on the context. Like:
"I went to the store because I needed some food" doesn't need a comma at all...
and I can't think of an example with "because," but yeah, the comma comes before "because" if you're giving a reason for doing something...
These are correct...
Green is my favorite color because it reminds me of the forest.
I hate my internet browser because it's so slow.
Because of my internet browser, it takes me a long time to load web pages.
and I can't think of one right now where you'd need a comma...
hope that helps a little... wink
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Posted: Sun Dec 28, 2008 6:54 pm
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