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 Posted: Sun Aug 26, 2007 9:59 pm
Why me? very well done!!!! i like it alot, its better than alot of the poems i write! I only saw one problem with it honestly, and that was that the why me was a little repetetive, but thats fine because its your poem and its the way you wanted, so very nice job!!!
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Posted: Sun Aug 26, 2007 10:28 pm
Thanks. Hey did any of you noticed I stopped in mid sentence on my story? lol lol
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Posted: Mon Aug 27, 2007 3:34 pm
sweatdrop Yeah you silly goose! Why'd you do that? rofl 4laugh
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Posted: Mon Aug 27, 2007 9:50 pm
Cause I wasn't paying attention. rofl 4laugh blaugh Anyways, do you think the part of my prologue where I told the names of the twelve kingdoms do you think that the names are a bit too... noticeable (considering I used the names of the months).
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Posted: Mon Aug 27, 2007 10:52 pm
It's obvious, but if that's what you want then go for it. It's your story and nobody's going to blame you for that.
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Posted: Mon Aug 27, 2007 10:55 pm
Well just wait till you hear the name of the sword. I think its pretty cool. xp
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Posted: Tue Aug 28, 2007 3:14 pm
eek Well go on then tell us what it is! No no don't have time to tell us; tell us the story!
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Posted: Tue Aug 28, 2007 3:21 pm
blaugh I know. I'm going to work on it right now.
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Posted: Tue Aug 28, 2007 8:41 pm
Beautiful, my favorites being Why me? and the road to darkness. Excellent work! Also thanks for commenting on my story.
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Posted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 3:05 pm
No problem. I love to read and write. If you have anything else you want me to read just let me know.
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Posted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 9:22 pm
heart Forgive me if I seem a little impatient, but I WANNA HEAR MORE OF THE STORY! Please, pretty please can we hear more of it? Pleeeeeeaaaaassssseeee??
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Posted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 3:37 pm
Yes. I'm getting to that. Just give me some time because right now I have writers block. I know where I want the story to go I just don't know how to get it there. blaugh scream gonk
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Posted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 8:59 pm
hmm... that always is a toughy... let me know when you've updated okay? Like I said I can't wait to hear more! rolleyes rofl
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Posted: Sat Sep 01, 2007 5:11 pm
I will. Right now I'm starting to get some idea's.
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Posted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 7:43 pm
GARAAGAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA THE WRITERS BLOCK IS KILLING ME no seriously it is there is a big hole where the wonderful writing part of my brain used to be.
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