[Bloodline Creation]

[BlisscuitsAndGravy]

This is a canon bloodline that I do own. Some input was given to me from another source, but this is all my own property and is material listed in my own guild, Bingo Book Roulette. The image is also my own work. I would like if none of this was edited unless for purpose to fit the systems of the guild.

Background Info
Storm Release (嵐遁, Ranton; Viz "Gale Style") is an advanced nature kekkei genkai that combines Lightning Release and Water Release to create energy beams that can be guided towards the enemy. Despite the name of this nature, it does not manipulate storms; it instead manipulates beams of electricity that flow like water. The name is more symbolic, representing the names of the natures used to create this nature. In the movie, Hiruko displays a more literal version, manipulating storm clouds charged with lightning.

This Bloodline also grants the user the ability to produce [ Black Lightning ]. Black Lightning is a unique form of Lightning Release. As the name suggests, the lightning produced by this ability's techniques is black in colour. The ability to utilise black electricity was possessed by the Third Raikage, who passed it onto Darui. Both users have the stylised kanji for "lightning" (雷, kaminari) tattooed on their shoulders; Darui on his left and the Raikage on his right. This seems to be a distinctive trait, as Ginkaku and Kinkaku recognised Darui's possession of this ability through his tattoo. It is similar to Amaterasu in that it is the only other black-coloured technique.

Rules
• Ranton users have Raiton [ Lightning ] and Suiton [ Water ] as chakra elements.
• Ranton users have a tattoo of the kanji "lightning" (雷) on their body.
• Most Ranton users have a fierce loyalty, comparable to that of the Hatake.
• Most Ranton users have short fuses, but this is not a must.
• Most Ranton users have darker skin, but this is not a must.
• Most Ranton users have very pure and bright hair, but this is not a must.
• Ranton is a kekkei genkai valued highly by the Village Hidden in the Clouds. Most users should be from this village, but this is not a must.
• Must have the Personal Perk listed below.
• Black Lightning: Raiton techniques are black in color and boosts them up by a rank.

Strengths

• Ranton users can integrate their weapon with their own element, regardless of Class.
• Ranton users take significantly less damage from Raiton.
• Because of them giving off a constant electrical charge, they have a sixth sense of sorts which makes them good sensory type shinobi.

Weaknesses
• Ranton users take extra damage from Fuuton and Doton.
• Ranton users are not accustomed to using elements not related to their bloodline. Nonton jutsu and other elements other than Raiton or Suiton cost 1.5 times more chakra.

Techniques
Reizaa Saakasu [ Laser Circus ]
Passive
Manipulating their ability to mold Raiton and Suiton, the user will perform the needed handsign and release threads of "liquid lightning" from their freehand. Because of their composition and formation, these beams deal both impact and electric damage. The user is also able to bend these beams toward their target in order to deliver pinpoint strikes.
Each beam costs [3] chakra to form, and [1] chakra to bend.
• Requires [500] words to learn.

Hikari no Haikiryou [ Displacement of Light ]
Rank E
An add-on specifically for clones. The clone(s) will be encompassed by wobbling light patterns, which will cause it to appear to all but the user as either much larger or much smaller than it really is.

Ikatsu [ Threatening ]
Rank E
A basic Ranton ability in which the user will slap an object and have a thunder sound emit from that spot. The noise is loud enough to overlap most other sounds for a brief moment. If used offensively, a slap directly to the opponent can cause temporary deafness.

Saegiritte [ Interrupting ]
Rank C
Using one's hands as if they're using a slingshot, the user will pull back one hand and let loose. Three to five small white clouds will shoot towards the target in a straight line. Upon impact, the projectiles will stick and roll about the target as if an adhesive fluid. After setting for a short amount of time (1 post), the clouds will expand roughly two-fold, rendering the target a bit more susceptible to electricity, in addition to having some movement complications.
• Each cloud sticks for three [3] posts.

Kumogatta [ Cloud Formations ]
Rank D
A basic Ranton ability in which the user will create a human sized gray cloud, in any shape they desire, and push it off to drift for a little while (2 posts). Anyone or thing that comes into contact with this cloud will feel a moderate shock so long as they are within it.

Ooki Eizou, Chisai Eizou [ Major Image, Lesser Image ]
Rank D
Taking a slight stomp forward, the user's shadow will puff out a bit from the ground, but continue to act as normal. Any action that would cause the user to move against their will, such as attached chakra strings, Banshou Tenin, Nara-style jutsu, etc., would be momentarily interrupted by a forced feedback of chakra, delaying the effects by one [1] post. This effect only occurs once, unfortunately.

Mizu and Rai
Rank C
User does the necessary hand signs and the fires a stream of water from their left hand and a stream of electricity from their right. By crossing the two streams, it creates a more powerful technique that does B-Ranked Damage. Costs two C.

Hikari no Kekkai [ Light's Barrier ]
Rank B
After the needed handsigns are performed, a plate of fuzzy light appears upon the user's chest. This light will strike down light to medium projectiles, and is capable of protecting against explosives by quickly shelling over the entire body.
• Lasts three [3] posts.

Amagumo [ Rain Clouds ]
Rank C
This technique condenses moisture in the air to form an overcast sky. It should be noted that this technique does not cover much area, and after being performed it still takes roughly four [4] posts before the clouds form and break open. ( Only takes two [2] posts, if clouds are already present. )

Kumoritte [ Becoming Cloudy ]
Rank C
Stretching both hands outward, the user releases a continual mass of nearly pitch black clouds which almost utterly demolish visibility. This string of black clouds will continue for as long as the user's hands are outstretched, expanding at roughly 50 yards per post.
• Badly affected by the wind.

Ranton: Thunderclap Clone [ Storm Release: Clone Jutsul ]
Rank C
When the user focuses chakra, s/he has the ability to form a clone made entirely of sound and electricity. NOW this may sound awkward and hard to manage due to the fact that it is sound. The clone makes more noise then a normal clone would along with the eyes of the clone being yellow instead of the users own. When the clone is killed/defeated a loud burst of sound is bad, along with a shock of electricity to the enemies system. The sound has the ability to temperately deafen the enemy. Only two clones may be made at once.

Kumo no Fukushuu [ Arachnid's Revenge ]
Rank B
Similar to [ Kumoritte, ] the user will release a string of black clouds from their hands at roughly 50 yards per post. However, unlike Kumoritte which is merely used to disable visibility, these black clouds hold a creeping secret. Within the darkness lurks hundreds of tiny "thunder legs;" chakra created creatures which give off a small amount of light and emit an electric charge from each of their eight legs. In small amounts, the feeling of their legs on one's body is almost therapeutic, but in leagues these critters are capable of delivering an intense shock.
• Badly affected by the wind.

Makaze [ Devil's Storm ]
Rank A
Aiming their hand at their target, the user releases a capturing projectile in the fashion of a black cloud lump which expands and engulfs on impact. Once the target is encased by this cloud, they will immediately be electrocuted, rendering them either unconscious for an indefinite amount of time, or paralyzed for a moderate period (3 posts).

Raiton: Kurobansa [ Lightning Release: Black Panther ]
Rank A
The user performs a single handsign and tucks it close to their body, from here a substantial amount of black lightning will surge about their torso. By aiming the still held handsign, the user releases a mass of black lightning in the shape of a panther-like creature to electrocute their target. Because of its size and overall power, the panther is capable of causing severe damage if full contact is made.

Raiun • Honba [ Storm Cloud • Home ]
Rank A
The user releases black clouds from one hand while performing handsigns with the other. The spray of clouds will coil around and encompass on the user, forming a mass of electrically charged darkness. If anyone else ventures within the mass of clouds, they will almost instantaneously be assaulted by various electric surges, which will continue to barrage the body until said person leaves. Because of their nearly nonexistent weight, the user is free to move around at a lessened pace with this cover of electric pillows so long as they hold the single handsign.
• Lasts for [6] posts or until released.

Raiun • Douki [ Storm Cloud • Pulsation ]
Rank C
Extending the electric composition of [ Raiun • Honba, ] the user will use their free hand to deliver a solid palm thrust from within the clouds to send out a bulb of pure electricity at a rather high velocity. Unfortunately, because the clouds are so difficult to see through, the user typically has to have developed some method to get passed this, lest they literally be shooting in the dark.
• Obtained when [ Raiun • Honba ] is learned.

Raiun • Dendou Ranpi [ Storm Cloud • Electric Dissipation ]
Rank C
Rather than simply letting [ Raiun • Honba ] end, the user will supply additional chakra to the clouds before casting them off. Now, rather than simply fading away, the black clouds will cause an electric burst.
• Obtained when [ Raiun • Honba ] is learned.

Ranton: Plasma Vice
Rank A
This is a very, extremely tricky move to pull off. One mistake; and the user may never be able to handle the Ranton ever again. The users will put two hands together, pulling them apart as a stream of energy that's colored the same as the users will form into a ball. Next the user will then focus it over one of their hands, much like Chidori. Following this, thunder clouds will wrap across the users arm and up to the shoulder, thunder circulating through them as the user must then balance the chakra into power while releasing enough to keep the clouds firm. For the final part, the cloud will act as a massive propelling unit; shooting the user forward in a giant lack twister of lightning and clouds before th fist comes into contact with the enemy, which would then almost instantly kill the enemy and severely damage the arm of the user. This justsu has a horrible recoil effect; as you will keep going until you hit something, and you wont be able to use the arm for the rest of the battle.

Hongumori [ Low-Cloud Overcast ]
Rank S
With a simple snap of the fingers, the user causes overhead clouds in the area to become physically heavy, forcing them to fall rather quickly to the ground. Everyone, including the user, feels the weight of these fallen fluffs, causing movement to become a struggle. ( Moving through piles of snow, is a good example. ) Then, starting with the most conductive objects in the affected area, severe surges of lightning will indiscriminately occur within the white.
• Lasts [5] posts.
• Can only be performed once per fight.

Hijutsu: Ryuuki Boufuuryuu [ Secret Technique: Rising Dragon Storm ]
Rank S
The user takes aim with both hands, builds up chakra, and then releases a twisting torrent of black clouds at the target at an impressive speed. While twisting, the black clouds will separate and converge multiple times, as if dragons clashing during a fight. This odd display can be rather confusing for first time opponents... or, victims, rather. When the attack finally makes impact, the clouds will cluster, swirl, and electrocute a rather well sized area. Then, just as the technique seems to be coming to an end, the user will perform one last handsign, and the clouds will coil and spin into a miniature storm tornado. Although it only gives a few rotations, the second half of this technique is just as, if not more so lethal as the first.

Ranton: Raikōhō [ Storm Release: Thunder Roar Sear ]
Rank S
Clouds will cover the sky and lightning will fall onto the user; allowing him to channel every bit of that voltage into his fingertip. Then, with ever single bit of voltage and power, the user will release it in the form of a spear of pure, condensed storm lightning. This jutsu takes one post to charge before releasing.

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[Metal Trsu]

iMama Harkles

Give one more disadvantage, so it may be even with Strengths.

Ranton users are immune to Raiton, and Suiton heals them.
-They cannot be immune, and they cannot be healed, they may however take less damage than the normal shinobi from Raiton/Suiton.

Reizaa Saakasu [ Laser Circus ]
-Please make a Word count, not a post count.

Saegiritte [ Interrupting ]
-Make a C ranked Technique

Mizu and Rai
-You're saying that the technique requires double the amount of Normal chakra to use yes? If so then this is fine.

Hikari no Kekkai [ Light's Barrier ]
-Make B Rank

Amagumo [ Rain Clouds ]
-Suiton: Ame Yose no Jutsu [Water Release: Rain Summoning technique]
The same yes? Or does your technique, only create the clouds without the Rain?

Kumo no Fukushuu [ Arachnid's Revenge ]
Kumoritte [ Becoming Cloudy ]
-Just knock down the length that the clouds are stretched. 300ft each seems a bit much.

Makaze [ Devil's Storm ]
- For 3 post either make it a A ranked Technique, or I would change it to 2 post.

Raiun • Honba [ Storm Cloud • Home ]
- Does this make it so the user is unable to attack, or just unable to use other jutsu?

Hijutsu: Ryuuki Boufuuryuu [ Secret Technique: Rising Dragon Storm ]
- Take out the second/Last attack.

-Not Approved-

(Also please quote mods if you wish to have quicker responses, I had no idea this was even here. Thank you. ^_^)
 

[Metal Trsu]

Azra Reyne

I wouldn't give em tails or ears, just more feline like features, kinda like how Kiba acts?

Kōgeki o kamu - Class C
- Limited to...100 words? I'm a little confused.

Kezutta tsume - Class C
- Make it a Post length, not a Word count please.

- Not Approved -

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