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Posted: Sat Jan 10, 2009 3:24 pm
[Since we need more females in MoonClan, I have created Moonshine, a cat named after bootlegged alcohol. xD] New Profile Username: Saint_Oriel Name: Moonshine Clan: None - Rogue. Rank: None - Rogue. Age: 21 moons Gender: Female Parents: N/A Kits: None. Apprentice/Mentor: None. Personality: Moonshine is a rough, tough, rowdy she-cat, ready to kill at a moments notice. She doesn't appreciate having other cats around most of the time, especially if they cannot care for themselves. Appearance: Moonshine is a light gray cat with white streaks and ice blue eyes. She's a small short haired she-cat, but very pretty and has had to fight off young male toms time after time. History: Moonshine was born and raised a rogue and has known no other life. Her mother named her Moonshine because she 'shined like the moon'. Moonshine had been flattered then. However, it turned out that her mother had prefered her brother, Blood, over her and her other brother and sister. The three of them had run off together, ditching their mother and brother. Sleet, her brother, and Cherry, her sister, had left her when her leg had been broken by a twoleg kit. She's never quite recovered emotionally from that experience. Previous Names: None. Other: She's living on 'MoonClan' territory.
New Profile Username: Saint_Oriel Name: Echo Clan: None - Housecat. Rank: None - Housecat. Age: 11 moons. Gender: Female Parents: N/A Kits: None. Apprentice/Mentor: None. Personality: Echo is a sweet, playful cat, although curiousity is her downfall. She lives far away from any other housecats, though on occasion she sees rogues. She loves to catch sparrows and is quick enough that she can even catch rabbits, though it brings her close to the Clan cats. She'd met one once, an apprentice hunting the same rabbit she was chasing. He told her he wouldn't hurt her this time, but that next time she came onto WindClan territory he'd mess her up so bad that no medicine cat would be able to save her. Curious though she was, she paid attention to the scent markers left by WindClan cats. Appearance: Echo is a long haired black cat with gold eyes and a beautiful purr. History: Echo has always lived with twolegs, though she is what they call and inside-ouside cat and could live on her own, but she likes the company the twolegs provide her. She had no brothers or sisters and her mother was a rogue. The twolegs had kept her warm and safe after he mother abandoned her. Previous Names: None. Other: She really does want to spend time with other cats, though.
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Posted: Fri Jul 10, 2009 3:26 pm
((are you continuing this one)) whee
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Posted: Fri Jul 10, 2009 4:22 pm
ooooooooh Im suppose to make proffiles here for those sepreate ones am I??Like thunderclan and stuff 3nodding blaugh
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Posted: Fri Jul 10, 2009 4:41 pm
Yes. Please post kits here before roleplaying, or request a cat that's currently an NPC. smile
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Posted: Fri Jul 10, 2009 4:46 pm
Dont worry I will I just figured that out thanks so much blaugh
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Posted: Sat Jul 11, 2009 10:26 am
Alright. You've got three rogues trying to join ThunderClan, and one very knowledgable kittypet hanging around RiverClan. Now, ThunderClan has a really prejudiced leader right now, so that's not a good idea. So is Tornstar. They'd certainly be accepted by MoonClan, however. That or WindClan would be your best idea.
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Posted: Sat Jul 11, 2009 5:59 pm
Lol XD yes hehehe, well their kits so he should feel sorry for them XD I didnt see a moonclan when I posted XD I could try windclan but lets see what happens 3nodding 3nodding
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Posted: Mon Jul 27, 2009 6:46 pm
((Nevermind theyll just be in moonclan it would be easier that way))
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Posted: Thu Jul 30, 2009 1:23 am
Okay, can you tell me what exactly is happening with those three? It's kind of confusing. By the way, I'm going to go ahead and grammar nazi edit your posts. That okay?
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Posted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 4:37 pm
((pretty simple really they got seperated from their mother who is dead, their sister is sick, and injured, starclan is leading them to moonclan? Not much is happening wiht them, their just being lead to saftey thats fine go a head I know my grammer is horrible but its gotten better you can go a head)
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Posted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 6:10 pm
Mary Sue TestYou should try this - it's fun, and has good feedback. Now, I don't know the history of your characters, so I can't even attempt to do it. Oh well. You don't need to put parentheses, this is an OOC thread. My inner grammar nazi is pleased. c:
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Posted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 6:11 pm
Also, why would StarClan lead them to MoonClan, where they don't believe in StarClan?
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Posted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 12:47 am
((kane is nothing like you. He is not at all cool; in fact, he thinks cool is a temperature reading, and when he says "Oh, I just put on whatever old thing's lying around," he means "on the floor, where I threw it last night - but I turned the underwear inside out first." There's never been anything special about him that he could see; boy, is he in for a surprise. He's had a rough life - to say the least! Angst? Histronics? His speciality. And he's gotten no slack from you.
In general, you care deeply about kane, but you're smart enough to let him stand on his own, without burdening him with your personal fantasies or propping him up with idealization and over-dramatization. kane is a healthy character with a promising career ahead of him.
HAHAH I Knew it hes not a Mary sue buhahahaha XD))
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Posted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 12:51 am
Snowy Zombie Also, why would StarClan lead them to MoonClan, where they don't believe in StarClan? Their grandfather was an old warrior who left the clan to stay with his mate, he told them storys, and his son thought it was nonsesne while his daughter their mother thought it was true and told them storys XD biggrin so they do know about it if you must go that way XD)
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