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 Posted: Thu Nov 08, 2007 12:03 am
xD I'm glad you like it! I think it was quite a successful re-routing of the story and leaves it open to any plot to evolve out of.
In reply to your other post: That is what I was worried about, a classic track-the-terrorist-and-kill-him plot. You can do one well, but it is so over done that it can turn dry and boring quickly. Plus being a sensitive issue at the moment... I just tend to be a bit pollitically correct at times.
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Posted: Thu Nov 08, 2007 12:18 am
Well, this may be true, but statistically some sort of romance shows up in 102.4% of all stories.
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Posted: Thu Nov 08, 2007 12:23 am
True xD You have me on that one. Love and romance is also a basic and natural human interaction, so you would expect it to be in almost all stories. Where as blowing someone/something up isn't what I would call basic or natural
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Posted: Thu Nov 08, 2007 3:49 pm
And power-hungry Slytherin loved those of great ambition...|> ---| biggrin DDDDDDDDDDD
Wingo, that was awesome. Mooby, I can't wait to see your addition. And now I'm all excited about getting to write a part after that!
(You guys are both brilliant.)|--- <|Slytherin Pride!
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Posted: Thu Nov 08, 2007 11:22 pm
*Grins* biggrin I'm glad you like it!
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Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2007 4:31 pm
Mooby, you are a god!! I love the addition you made. I love the morphing you've added in and the espionage. I'm going to spend some time thinking of the next addition
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Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2007 7:36 pm
Okay, that was completely not the way I would have taken the plot, but I love it nonetheless. Can't wait to see what you guys come up with next!
(Since I'm not going to be around much, I figure I'll start writing again once I'm back here full-time to make things easier.)
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Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2007 8:04 pm
Where are you going to be? Who will fight me for page domination?
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Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2007 8:07 pm
Exams (read the thread entitled D: for details). And I will win the page-domination war once I return!
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Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2007 8:21 pm
pfft... as if! I have dominated this forum for almost a week now razz
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Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2007 8:40 pm
Only because I haven't been around lately. ^.^
By the way, I like Burger's interesting addition to the story.
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Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2007 8:58 pm
I just read it... It seems this may be steering away from government testing.... from BBs addition it seems he's going with the idea of Marcus having a gift and this mob wanting to obtain it.
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Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2007 9:40 pm
Mine wasn't about government testing...
I thought I'd made it clear that Marcus was worrying about other morphed creatures (alluding to him being some sort of alien).
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Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2007 10:15 pm
I guess that's the beauty of this project xD
I was thinking it he was a government test subject who escaped. To track him the government are using other people who have undergone the test and are loyal.
After BBs addition I'm now thinking this could go along the lines of someone born with a gift and an organisation wishes to exploit it. Or a test subject (again) who had been released after the test was over, and the organisation wants to know what they did.
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Posted: Tue Nov 13, 2007 6:27 am
I think I may throw my hat into the ring on this one.
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