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Kurai_kotori

PostPosted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 8:41 pm


The scorch marks formed the shape of a serpent. As Kurai prepared a supercharged attack, Rin suddenly realized what it was. She had seen it multiple times during her ascension from Hell, and she knew all too well what would happen if Kurai unleashed his rage. No time to think though, Kurai was about to attack. "Wait! Kurai, don't!" she shouted, but to no avail. Kurai had launched himself whole heartedly for Victor, doing his damnedest to hurt this meanest spirit. It was the worst mistake of his life.

As Kurai struck, his aura was shattered like glass, and electricity seemed to emanate from the point of contact between his fist and Victor. The only problem was, he wasn't touching Victor. He was still a foot from punching him in the forehead. With a great cry of anguish, Kurai unleashed all that he had. Which was exactly what Victor was hoping for. There was a great flash of light and fire, and as suddenly as he had appeared, Victor had vanished.

Rin had watched all of this in fear, anxiously waiting to see the outcome. What seemed like hours of tense action lasted only a few seconds. To her relief, however, Victor was gone and Kurai seemed unfazed, if still a little confused. Rin laughed lightly as she realized that Kurai must have been able to send his Sire back to Hell somehow. Suddenly, there was a loud thud on the bar in front of Rin and there was Kye, looking disheveled but safe. He was unconscious but seemed to be coming around. With a start, he woke and nearly collided with Rin's forehead. Kurai smiled in relief as he watched Kye slide from the bar top onto the floor, constantly reassuring Rin that, yes, he was fine, and no, he wasn't hurt.

Kye and Rin both embraced before looking over to Kurai, who had his back to them. Rin seemed relieved about the whole situation now, but Kye smelt something different. A slight taint to the air. They both started as they heard a gasp of pain. Kurai was bent over, hands to his head as he groaned in agony. Kye and Rin ran to his side and tried to put a comforting hand on his back, only to be thrown across the room with a wild sweep of Kurai's arm. His right arm thrashed them away violently while his left hand grasped his face, covering his left eye and tangling his fingers up into his bangs. The eye that glared at them from the right side of his face was a brilliant poisonous yellow, full of hatred and a lust for all earthly things, wishing to indulge in every sin of the flesh possible. Then a more physical transformation occurred. Kurai's hair, usually laying flat and blonde, took on a more wild style, as streaks of red slipped through it, lighting the edges of the vampires greatest vanity. Simultaneously, his finger nails turned to claws, stretching forth and thickening, sharp enough and strong enough to rival the claws of a lycan.

Kye and Rin watched all of this in horror. They stood and made as if they were going to attempt to come near him again. Before they could even take a step, a desperate voice leaked from their friends lips, which were changing to a light blue as he spoke. "Stay...AWAY!!" he yelled, shattering the windows as his preternatural voice filled the small building and crumbled every bottle and fixture and material made of glass. He recovered himself, standing straight as though all of the pain had gone. With an all too familiar smirk, he strode towards them a few steps stopping a few feet away. "Melodia, Melodia, panic in the galleria." He smiled even wider. "My, what an interesting mind my child has. So full of unfulfilled lusts and desires. I think I'll borrow his body and sate my own desires as well. Ta-ta, m'lady, m'lord." Without a backwards glance, he dashed out the door and took to the air, mocking laughter ringing out into the night after him.
PostPosted: Thu Sep 20, 2007 6:26 pm


(i'm not sure i can come up with anything to follow such a grande display of ones vocaulary and writing expertice...)

(but , alas, i shall try.)

Kye watched the fading shadow of his friends possesed body. Shock had befell him. One minute he had been standing in a crowd of people the next he was standing next to a demon in hell, who was watching a crytal ball with increasing interest. Kye had looked to the ball, and in it he seen the last stop bar, and Kurai, powering up to hit an unseen enemy, however the instant kurai struck at the scorched doorway, Kye felt himself tugged back into the bar. the world spun and all of the sudden he fell on the bar.

when Kye got up he found Rin embracing him and insistntly asking if he was alright, ignoring his constant stream of "yes"'s and "i'm fine"'s. Kurai, as weird of a Vampire as he was, was acting stranger than usual. Somthing in the air told him it was not a good thing. in fact he knew that smell.

Victor.

Kye's head swivled and a growl escaped his throat. he inched his way toward his friend, intent on notifying him of Victors sent. But Kurai Turned and swept him away with the flailing of one arm, and with such strength that was not normal for him.
Kye did not hear his friends cry for solitude, nor did he hear a word of what Victor said to them in his own son's body. the only thought that went through Kye's mind was the thought of hate, remorse, and the word:

KILL

thats all i could come up eith... though if noone adds, i'm gonna add to mine later, after i think of stuff.

Cyodie


rinalla

PostPosted: Sat Oct 06, 2007 6:10 am


The sudden wave of anger, animosity, and vengence was almost uncontainable. How often would Victor interfere?

At this point, the bar had cleared. Replacing the shotgun, Rin reminded herself to remain calm. She begun filling a pack, her hands steady as she went through the motions of closing down the bar.

Kye was much less contained. A fury wrapped around him. He knew he could not go after Kurai/Victor without Rin, but irritation flooded his system. "Why are you so calm?! Victor's back! We need to do something!" He shouted. With controlled calm, she faced him. At that moment he understood. There was no kindness in her face, the usual air of confidence dwindled, and her eyes had become a solid grey. The latter was a true, and physical, sign of her own anger. Kye piped down as she finished her activites.

Once outside the back door, she turned again to face him. "No matter what happens, you follow my lead. I've spent the best of my years working with Victor. Of the two of us, I know him best. And when I tell you to get out of there, you leave. No questions asked, no looking back. Do you understand that?"

She knew he hadn't heard her, his eyes and nose were focused in the direction of that which they hunt. Sighing, Rin turned down the alley way. Instantly she caught the scent that ruined the air, the chase had begun. Slinging her bag over one shoulder, and checking that her handgun was still in place, she began the hunt with Kye following up right behind her.
PostPosted: Thu Dec 27, 2007 1:20 pm


The alleyways were dark and deserted, traversed only rarely by the wretched and destitute. Rin and Kye ran quickly, disregarding, entirely, the rest of the night and world around them. Neither of them spoke, there was no need. They both knew exactly what they had to do, or risk losing one of their closest and oldest friends.

They continued stoically on in this manner, stopping only for a few seconds at a time to check around or corner or relocate the scent of their friend as it mixed with the melting pot of various other city smells and perfumes of the night.

*********

Elsewhere, Victor was enjoying the taste of blood after his long hiatus in Hell. He had happened upon an unfortunate group of muggers, and had taken it upon himself to punish them for their varied and numerous wrongs. Victor stood in a small clearing between buildings that was hidden from the street by the surrounding cityscape. Four men in varying states of health were scattered around him, twisted and broken. Their moans were like music to Victor's borrowed ears as he drank deeply from a fifth man, whom he clutched close to his chest like a long lost friend or lover.

Victor cried out in pain as a bullet, accompanied by the roar of a high powered rifle, toar through his shoulder.
"Drop the innocent, scumbag!" Victor cursed inwardly, but laughed softly on the outside.
"And who might you be, hm? Some kind of hero?" As Victor said this, he spun round to face the nuisance. "Some kind of hunter?"

Victor stared into the gray eyes of a grizzled and bearded man, simply stared as he felt some tug of recognition within him, telling him that something was not safe. And then he heard it, a voice that was difficult to hear, like it was far away. It called out n joy, getting stronger each time it repeated it's cry.
'Kobalt,' the voice cried. 'Kobalt!' And then it hit Victor, this man was one he did not know, but Kurai was familiar with him, and seeing as he was in Kurai's body, the familiarity must have triggered Victor's sense of familiarity.

Kobalt stared hard at the man before him, knowing him and realizing it, trying as hard as Victor awas to isolate the origin of this feeling. And then it hit him.
"Kurai!" he cried out, hardly able to believe what he was seeing. "Kurai, what are you doing?" His mouth hung agape as he watched the man he had known in the past rise up into the air and fly away.

Kurai_kotori

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