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 Posted: Thu Jun 11, 2009 5:04 pm
reedkit: ummmnn,we dont got one
skykit:shift
ravenkit surprised ur sister is right there. points tail toward moonshadow
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Posted: Thu Jun 11, 2009 5:06 pm
hi umm, im looking for a ... um, a place to stay, for a while
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Posted: Thu Jun 11, 2009 5:12 pm
Dawnspirit nodded. "We can spare some room," she said. "You can go to the nursery," she said. "I'll have one of the apprentices bring you some fresh-kill, so you have enough strength to feed your kits."
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Posted: Thu Jun 11, 2009 5:16 pm
ohh. blushes theyre, my friends kits.but... hes gone... looks up at sky. thank you...? erm, we havent introuduced ourselves.this is skykit, raven kit and reedkit, and im moonshadow.
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Posted: Thu Jun 11, 2009 5:22 pm
Dawnstar nodded. "Welcome to MoonClan, Skykit, Ravenkit, Reedkit, Moonshadow," she greeted.
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Posted: Thu Jun 11, 2009 7:34 pm
Vixen blinked at Dawnstar, ready to follow her, slightly unnerved. The leader? She had no idea wild cats were organized into ranks.
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Posted: Fri Jun 12, 2009 4:24 am
Flicking her tail towards Vixen, she padded over to her den, sitting down patiently for Vixen to approach.
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Posted: Fri Jun 12, 2009 9:43 am
Vixen stepped into the den, feeling nervous. What should she do now? She sat down cautiously and blinked at Dawnstar once again.
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Posted: Fri Jun 12, 2009 10:49 am
"Vixen, as you know, I am Dawnstar, the leader of MoonClan," she said. "We can provide shelter for you, since apparently Grayeyes has taken a liking to your presence. If you want, we can offer you permanent residence. You can become a warrior." Her eyes shone. "Is this what you want?"
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Posted: Fri Jun 12, 2009 10:51 am
((Wishful Thinking, I would appreciate it if you used correct punctuation, grammar, Capitalization, and phrasing. Your post that said, "ohh. blushes theyre, my friends kits.but... hes gone... looks up at sky. thank you...? erm, we havent introuduced ourselves.this is skykit, raven kit and reedkit, and im moonshadow." Should have been this.
--"Ohh." Moonshadow meowed, blushing. "They're my friends kits. But...He's gone." She meowed. She looked up at the sky. "Thank you...? Erm, we haven't introduced ourselves. This is skykit, Ravenkit, and Reedkit, and I'm Moonshadow."--
Please, please try to use better Writing skills. It makes everything easier to read and much more pleasant to read. When your cats talk, use quotation marks. It helps dramatically.
Thank you. - Arainar.))
Frostbranch watched as Vixen padded away. His ice blue eyes looked over at Brackenclaw. "Well...the clan just keeps on growing." He meowed to him. Brackenclaw almost kind of scoffed, padding away. Grayeyes shook her head at him, smiling a bit. "I'll stay with the kit for now." She meowed to Frostbranch. He nodded to her, and padded towards the clearing of camp.
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Posted: Fri Jun 12, 2009 11:05 am
"A...warrior?" Vixen gazed at Dawnstar in wonder, not entirely sure what she meant, but knew it must be a great honor by the shine in her eyes. And somehow, it seemed...familiar. Like she knew somewhere in her heart exactly what Dawnstar spoke of.
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Posted: Fri Jun 12, 2009 11:47 am
"Yes," she said, nodding. "It is a great privilege. Most leaders would never do this, but I can sense your pain. You obviously escaped from somewhere? Twolegs, right?"
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Posted: Fri Jun 12, 2009 12:12 pm
"Yes. My twoleg's home burned down. I took that oppurtunity to leave and start a new life in the wild. I've always felt like something was missing as a housecat."
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Posted: Fri Jun 12, 2009 7:56 pm
She nodded. "Do you accept the rights and privileges of a warrior?" she asked. "Of course, you'll be an apprentice first."
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Posted: Fri Jun 12, 2009 11:24 pm
Vixen swallowed hard. She had no idea what she was about to get herself into, but it was definitely better than having to fend for herself out in the forest, competing against other animals. She nodded to Dawnstar. "I accept."
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