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PostPosted: Sat Feb 26, 2005 10:02 am


New poem...

China Tear

I’ll sketch your China tear
as it swings from dip to dip,
an acrobat in its own right.
It’ll reach your curved neck
and I know I’ll wish to freeze it there,
freeze you in your second moment
ever of ecstasy.
Dark charcoal covers your body
in sheets of shaded tides,
breathing in and out with your sleepy pants.
Just one more minute, and
I’ll have you forever.

You let me watch as,
with a royal hope, you pinch your cheeks,
smiling with your eyes
and taunting with your frozen tears.
You’ll leave a sob pendant in the air
over your bureau,
but I’ll be made to leave –
is a lover really more shameful,
despite his position or present grace
than a secret left by the lamp
every time one leaves the room?
The sob will stay, as tame as
a hunting hawk,
and you’ll make your future and fame.
Congratulations, my love,
my China tear.
PostPosted: Sat Feb 26, 2005 10:21 am


O.o you copied and pasted

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 26, 2005 11:05 am


Tis neither day
Nor tis night
For sun and moon
Are both in sight!

First tis dark
Then tis light
As the two forms
Finish their fight!


Image was too big so I have deleted feel free to re-post the same image as long as it has been re-sized
~Naru
PostPosted: Sat Feb 26, 2005 11:14 am


Is mine good?

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 26, 2005 11:17 am


whee
PostPosted: Thu Mar 03, 2005 5:27 am


*claps* i love that poem 3nodding

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PostPosted: Sat Mar 05, 2005 6:06 am


D = can you please resize that picture or it will be deleted
PostPosted: Sun Mar 06, 2005 2:14 pm


This is a poem I wrote last semester for a contest in english class, it's kinda long but not to long. This poem is what I have been feeling to other people at my school who I have been having trouble with, this is a lot in my girlfriend and my view since she helped me revise this poem before I handed it in last semester. I love this poem, I'm quite proud of it since I did so well on it, I got about a 90% on it so I am happy. So I hope you all like it.


Am I really that different?
By Melissa debelleval (that's me)

They seem to look down upon us
They think they are better than the rest of us
We are human beings
Just as they are

Why can't they treat us like normal people?
For we are just as normal as we can be
Except they don't think that
For we are just alittle different

I really don't get what the big deal is
For if it wasn't really normal
It would never have happened
WHy can't they just let us be
And stop pretesting against our sexuality

Stop treating us so different
Like we're a disease
Stop staring at us
As we walk down the hall hand-in-hand

We will not stop doing
What you think is so wrong
We like the way our life is
And we prefer not to live in dear

Fear that one night we will get beaten up
BY one of those people
WHo hate who we are
Jealous of our love

If only they would just stop and think
Love knowns no boundaries
Then maybe they'll understand
What we really feel

Why should we have to lie
And hide what we are
When no one else has to?
Give us one good reason

Stop resenting us
Stop whispering about us
And stop taunting us
As we walk down the hall

Don't laugh and giggle behind our backs
For now it's time
You need to grow up
And get a life of your own

Stop worrying about ours
Let us be
And you will soon see
We really are just as normal as you.

Had anyone ever heard of the Marien's drisedall drive? I'm not sure how to spell it, but it happens in Ontario and where-ever else in Canada for highs with students who want to put poems in for it. I didn't put this poem in but it was also a english assignment for the whole class. Anyways, I just wanted to post this blaugh

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 10, 2005 7:18 pm


Heaven on top
Hell below

Wher are we?
Inbetween?

Humans cant go to heaven
Humans dont want to go to hell

So wher we?
trapped between two roads!


i dont know about this but...just wrote it write now
PostPosted: Thu Mar 10, 2005 7:42 pm


Peacefull rivers,
Calming streams

Where is this place?
Where I find my self to be?

Is this heven,
no I do not think

But this isnt hell,
nor could it ever be

For the breaze is gentle,
as the water at my feet

The grass it sways,
lush and green

Brids they sing,
sweet melodys

I know this place,
Its peace, and its nice

I'm still on earth,
I know that for sure

But here I'm at peace
no worries nor cares

Revan Star


die_frosche_kaiserin11

PostPosted: Thu Mar 10, 2005 9:30 pm


saiyuki2
Cold as winter, strong as stone;
She faced the darkness all alone.
A silver goddess; a reflection.
A mirage: a recollection.
No return; no tuning back.
The past is gone, the future, black.
Serpants gather in thier nest,
And she stands above the rest.
Shadows hunt; She hunts the shadow.
The moon is risen; she stands below.
She views the world through the eyes of
others.
Black and white; there are no colors,
she looks down upon a shattered youth.
A shattered mirror shows the shattered thruth.


OMG i LOVE IT
PostPosted: Thu Mar 10, 2005 10:01 pm


ok now that i have skimmed through all 19 pages reading here and there... i must post a few peices of my work... hope you like.

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 10, 2005 10:06 pm


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PostPosted: Thu Mar 10, 2005 10:11 pm


Plagued
08/07/02

I feel as a plagued animal
but only loneness and boredom plagues me,
following me everywhere
as a disease feasting off my every emotion.
It craves and urns for loneliness,
as I left my love
and my stride to live.
For I have lost my passion,
the glare in my eyes,
and the little butterflies.

My love for others has flourished
and rotted away
as I was mistreated and misdiagnosed.
I was given medicine and advice
that just made me sicker.

As the disease spreads I slowly die.
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