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PostPosted: Thu Feb 06, 2014 11:02 am


Hikaro_rin
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So... you just did the exact same thing as Asuna. There are more people in the rp in the area than just you two. You ignored several posts. Try to be more careful in the future


indeed ill be sure to read more carefully in the future
PostPosted: Thu Feb 06, 2014 6:45 pm


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Explain to me, please, in great detail, what supernatural power, or mental disorder, Shinji has that allows him to feel no fear or worry whatsoever over the fact that he's at the mercy of a rather pissed off man several times more powerful than him, who has just proven that he can take him down in the blink of an eye with little to no effort.

There are a small number of things that make an RPC one dimensional, boring, cliche, or just plain stupid. Having no fear, without a good reason behind it, is at the top of that list. Now, that might not apply at higher ranks. If Segare did the same to Luo it'd be nothing. If Shinji somehow did it to Segare Segare would be laughing his head off. But you're not at that level. You're an academy student. Not even that yet. You're a civilian, no more powerful or skilled than anyone else except in whatever areas your profession and type benefits give you a small boost to. And even then you're only at genin level in those areas, which is still pathetically weak.

So for Shinji to have no fear at all in a situation like this is either bad writing, a failure to connect to the emotional state of your RPC in a given situation, or something incredibly unique about the RPC's mind that cripples their ability to feel what, in this situation, is a life preserving instinct.

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 06, 2014 7:11 pm


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Explain to me, please, in great detail, what supernatural power, or mental disorder, Shinji has that allows him to feel no fear or worry whatsoever over the fact that he's at the mercy of a rather pissed off man several times more powerful than him, who has just proven that he can take him down in the blink of an eye with little to no effort.

There are a small number of things that make an RPC one dimensional, boring, cliche, or just plain stupid. Having no fear, without a good reason behind it, is at the top of that list. Now, that might not apply at higher ranks. If Segare did the same to Luo it'd be nothing. If Shinji somehow did it to Segare Segare would be laughing his head off. But you're not at that level. You're an academy student. Not even that yet. You're a civilian, no more powerful or skilled than anyone else except in whatever areas your profession and type benefits give you a small boost to. And even then you're only at genin level in those areas, which is still pathetically weak.

So for Shinji to have no fear at all in a situation like this is either bad writing, a failure to connect to the emotional state of your RPC in a given situation, or something incredibly unique about the RPC's mind that cripples their ability to feel what, in this situation, is a life preserving instinct.


I have made the edits and also ill be sure to check myself from now on I often lose track of the personality I gave to this RPC as well as remember how weak he truly is at this stage in the RP. It is no ones fault but mine and I can understand your irritation if not anger. but if I had to try and explane what I was getting at it would be just to show the level of anger and rage that can consume him at any given time. I agree that saying no fear was a fault and an example of bad writing. but the purpose of all of this was to just simply give a display of my RPC's anger and to show just how much it blinds his judgment
PostPosted: Sat Feb 08, 2014 4:12 pm


just a heads up my leave date just jumpped from september 21 to march 17!!! my activity level will be low up until then and then after that point i will be gone for about a good 6 -7 months

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 08, 2014 4:21 pm


That's, quite a jump.
PostPosted: Sun Feb 09, 2014 6:36 am


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Sorry, I've been doings lots of stuff in New York. xP
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 09, 2014 6:41 am


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Whar yoo ben?!

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Sorry, I've been doings lots of stuff in New York. xP
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Hi Luo! Is the Ushio clan striving now?
PostPosted: Mon Feb 10, 2014 2:35 pm


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Think you can edit your post a bit? I'm just having a hard time believing your character of all people could so quickly become comfortable enough with his own situation to just laugh at someone else facing what he could have ended up with himself, and also immediately walk up to Segare, again, of all people, and casually start chatting away. Logically, he'd be looking at Shinji and realizing that had pretty nearly been himself, though he didn't do nearly as much to deserve it.

Assuming of course, that he doesn't have some sort of mental problems.

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PostPosted: Wed Feb 12, 2014 7:28 am


Ah, pancakes. Is there any other meal you can be done eating practically before you're done cooking, and then enjoy for the rest of the day?
PostPosted: Thu Feb 13, 2014 7:25 am


I have what appears to be a three day storm moving in, and already starting here. Not sure if I'll have a power loss during that time, but I do know our woodpile is empty and my family has gone AWOL, so I'm gonna have to go fill it. I may not be on a lot today, and I can't guarantee anything until the snow ends. On Sunday.

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 15, 2014 9:07 am


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Hi Luo! Is the Ushio clan striving now?

Well we're around. Apart from a few NPC Ushio I might use from time to time as ambassadors of the clan, it's just me so far. Wouldn't mind another around though.

@Hinote: Huh, seems like you're catching the same three day snow storm I just had to deal with.
PostPosted: Sat Feb 15, 2014 9:24 am


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Wouldn't mind another around though.

@Hinote: Huh, seems like you're catching the same three day snow storm I just had to deal with.


There's actually been an Ushio app waiting for you to check it for a few weeks now. lol

The storm mostly ended the first day, got a mostly clear day the second, and now a sprinkling today. Not as bad as expected, but still a lot of snow.

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 15, 2014 9:35 am


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Wouldn't mind another around though.

@Hinote: Huh, seems like you're catching the same three day snow storm I just had to deal with.


There's actually been an Ushio app waiting for you to check it for a few weeks now. lol

The storm mostly ended the first day, got a mostly clear day the second, and now a sprinkling today. Not as bad as expected, but still a lot of snow.

Yeeeaaaah, since that's not one of the application threads I moderate exclusively, quoting me would help a lot more. I mean if you knew it was sitting there, you could've even quoted me to go take a look to avoid it sitting there that long.

For us the fist day was the brunt of it, and the second we had intermittent snow all day. The third day, the temperature shot up and began melting the snow/ice, but it froze over that night.
PostPosted: Sat Feb 15, 2014 9:52 am


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Yeeeaaaah, since that's not one of the application threads I moderate exclusively, quoting me would help a lot more. I mean if you knew it was sitting there, you could've even quoted me to go take a look to avoid it sitting there that long.

For us the fist day was the brunt of it, and the second we had intermittent snow all day. The third day, the temperature shot up and began melting the snow/ice, but it froze over that night.


I've told him to quote you a few times actually, and I think people have mentioned it to you a couple times, but you may not have seen the mention.

We actually got a bit of rain the first night, on top of the snow. Made plowing fun. I had to cut a massive chunk out of the driveway just to get enough grip to start where I actually wanted to plow. And even then I could only push like ten, fifteen feet before bogging down if I didn't get a good running start.

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 15, 2014 10:14 am


Yeah, that's the worst. We got rain on the second day, but it constantly shifted between either rain, sleet, or snow at any given point in time. Couldn't imagine having to plow though, that sounds super frustrating.
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