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 Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 6:39 pm
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Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 7:03 pm
Torrina Shirogane Raven Kitsune One fic I read a year ago. Riku+Knife+Raping/Tortures Sora=Distraught Rae. It was so... graphic... in a really bad way... D;
I think I saw that one. x_o *shudders* Poor Sora-chan...=( Oh, I just finished reading one that made me twitch a bit. It was about how Riku and Sora existed as a bandit and a prince, respectively, in a previous life, but they were killed, then later reincarnated. The thing is, though, in their 'new' lives, they were in a high school setting. Now, that wouldn't be too bad, but...Riku was a jock, and Sora was a rebel, and their 'cliques', so to speak, hated each other for no reason. Again, this by itself wouldn't be horrible, but...the way the author described the cliques, it made them sound more like rival gangs than anything else. D: It was just really annoying, because there was no mention of anything resembling academics, which are, you know, the BACKBONE of the school system, and the author portrayed the characters in regards to their social groups, rather than their actual personalities, which irked me a lot. I mean, Sora was lab...I don't know...It just wasn't believable at all. By the time I finished reading the eight chapters, I felt like writing a review and asking the author if people at her school actually took social groups that seriously. The way the whole thing was set up was just really frustrating. D: I actually had liked that fanfic when I first started it, but when I realized they were reincarnated into the high school setting, I quickly got bored and stopped reading... I don't even remember that much of it anymore.
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Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 7:05 pm
Lol, I don't blame you. XD
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Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 7:08 pm
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Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 7:16 pm
XD Thanks...*munches*
Hmmm...You can't think of anything to say? There's always room for improvement...
What about the other random fic that was posted? That one's, like, almost a year old, and could use some serious revising. ^^;
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Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 7:43 pm
Torrina Shirogane XD Thanks...*munches* Hmmm...You can't think of anything to say? There's always room for improvement... What about the other random fic that was posted? That one's, like, almost a year old, and could use some serious revising. ^^; Do you mean the one on your FF.net profile?
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Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 7:47 pm
No, the one on the previous page of this thread.
(But, now that I think about it, the one on my ff.net profile could use some revising, too. ^^; )
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Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 8:02 pm
I don't know how to revise your fics, because I think they pwned my crap. crying So, first of all, the one on the previous page was so stunningly cute. You should post that on your FF.net account!!
Oh, and speaking of that, the drabble made me laugh. I sent you a review.
Seriously, look for somebody who can write better for critiquing. x_x;
Oh, by the way, you're only six days older than me... *noticed while looking at your profile* RANDOM STALKER-LIKE COMMENT, sorry. crying
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Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 8:07 pm
Psh...My crap isn't even in the same league as your stuff!
XD Thanks. Oh, and just so you know, it was based on a song called 'We Danced Anyway' by Deana Carter. You know, just in case you want to listen to it...
=D Yay! Reviews! ^______^ *huggle*
XD Wow, really? What a coincidence! So, your birthday's February 22nd? :3
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Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 8:12 pm
Torrina Shirogane Psh...My crap isn't even in the same league as your stuff! XD Thanks. Oh, and just so you know, it was based on a song called 'We Danced Anyway' by Deana Carter. You know, just in case you want to listen to it... =D Yay! Reviews! ^______^ *huggle* XD Wow, really? What a coincidence! So, your birthday's February 22nd? :3 You're right... mine's so bad it doesn't deserve to be anywhere. Dx Nope, the title sounds familiar though... Yup, that's my birthday, with good ol' Mr. George Washington's... xd My birthday SO used to be a holiday before "President's Day" :XP:
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Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 8:14 pm
=O That is so not what I meant. Your work is, like, on top of a gold pedestal, whereas mine's out in the mud with yesterday's trash. XD
Isn't that Eiri Yuki's birthday, too? Meh...maybe it was the 23rd...*can't remember* sweatdrop
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Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 8:25 pm
Torrina Shirogane =O That is so not what I meant. Your work is, like, on top of a gold pedestal, whereas mine's out in the mud with yesterday's trash. XD Isn't that Eiri Yuki's birthday, too? Meh...maybe it was the 23rd...*can't remember* sweatdrop LOL, I know. But I think your stuff is good, seriously! My fanfics have improved by a whole lot from where I started over a year ago... back when I wrote ToS, they were... CRAP. No, actually, Eiri's is on the 23rd-- I remember looking at the date and getting frustrated... ^^; Cid's is on the 22nd if that counts for anything. xd Anyway, gonna head off to bed. G'night, sweet (RikuSora x3 ) dreams. heart
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Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 8:28 pm
Lol, thanks. ^__^
XD Ah, I knew it was around there, at least...^^; Lol, at least you share a birthday with an FF character. The only person I share a birthday with (that I can think of) is John McEnroe.
Aw, 'night, 'night! *wishes you yummy Riku/Sora dreams* :3
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Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 8:45 pm
Yeah, I believe that is Mr. Yuki's birthday! ^^
The only person I share a birthday with is Elijah Wood. Aw well; he's hot.
My fanfics probably belong in the crap list somewhere too. Ah well. *runs off to go burn things*
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Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 9:49 pm
Gah! But...Your stuff is amazing, too!
*giggle* Elijah Wood is hot, though.
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