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| do you think for my first time making an RP i did good? |
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| it is to advanced for my little mind......... |
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| its the best RP eva! |
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 Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2007 9:11 am
"Fine," Riane said dully. She wasn't expecting that. At least he wasn't one of those stupid horny inmates that she had been trying to kill.
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Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2007 9:26 am
"am not a stupid horny inmate, if thats what you are thinking,though it would be nice, my life is more important than my hormones." lucian said with dignaty.
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Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2007 9:38 am
((erm.....so....-____-'' um...
nvm. ill make it up as i go along xD i was never good with planning -coughs- ))
Jessica stepped off the helicopter that brought her to the prison.
She looked around a bit and tried to move one hand, that was handcuffed to the other.
The 3 men that brought her here grabbed the chain of her handcuff and roughly pulled her forward towards a door.
"I'm guessing it'll be tougher to escape this place...."
She thought with a smile.
"But I like challenges."
One man took a phone and whispered something inaudible in it.
He turned back to her.
"Someone will come to accompany u in soon."
He said.
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Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2007 9:52 am
----the men quicly got back inot the ship that looked like a helicopter and went back inot space, then she was left standing alnoe, on the ash surface of crematoria. all of a sudden two gait doors opend, and she saw that they were intertwinded in the middle, hooking them togeather by bars. then theyt were fully open, there about ten men with grav. guns pointing at her, you can run, and die, or come in here with us.
the gaurds saw she was about to run, when in the distance, like everday, the ground was chatching on fire, because the planet was so close to the sun. half of the planet was on fire at all times, and it would shift. there was no living life, on the planet crematoria, exept for the prizon, they waited as the 10,000 heat aprached her, it was miles away, and in a couple of minutes it would be on her. she had to make a decion. and fast.
"if she wasnts to stay out there, then leave her out there" the cpt said, as he started to close the 10 ton blast doors.
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Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2007 10:16 am
(( oooh. i didnt know that the ground can catch on fire o.o
is that a fact or what? xD
wait, wait wait o.o'' this is a different planet??? o.o''
whoa xD i didnt realize that >.>'' gawsh, i have a short-attention span rofl xD
n correct me if im wrong, but i didnt post anything in the last part about running away >.> ))
Jessica glanced around at the men holding guns at her.
She raised an eyebrow when the doors seemed to be moving in slow motion, closing.
The chains on her handcuffs clanked together as she took a small step forward.
"This is the right place, is it not?
And in case none of you knew, Chapter 6, Section 4a clearly states that it's against the law to kill at the prizon..."
She said slowly. Her pale blonde hair danced around her as she glanced around.
The flames slowly and quietly slipped closer and closer.
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Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2007 12:59 pm
"Good, because if you were, you would lose your life," Riane sneered. She hated most of the men here, but he was different. At least he helped a bit, no matter what you owed him.
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Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2007 3:10 pm
the Cpt stoped the doors, "well, it looks like you decided not to get roasted" the cpt said. he led her into the hanger bay"and if i would kill you, it wouldnt matter, i could say you fell."the cpt sneered. he led he through a room and inot what looked like a long hallway, that streached on forever. it had tracks like a railroad, and a cart, that had six seats in it. they all got in, the gaurds and the cpt, she was chained onto the back opening of the cart. when the gaurd pressed a button the cart flew ahead. it went about 25 miles an hour. after a couple hours the cart screached a stop. they all got out, "so, how do you plan on escaping, when the tunnul is about 143 kilometers?"the cpt said as he stood her up.
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Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2007 5:25 pm
Brychon heard the small track racer screech to a stop,he sat up and and laughed to himself.The new prisoner was in for a ride.Especially since WAR was going on.
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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 5:29 am
Aubry looked up at the new comer. she sighed. another one to explain things to... and thank god it was a girl, she would not stand it if it was another guy...
"hello...." she said, holding out her hand to hers. "im Aubry, who are you?" she looked at the captain, "when are the hounds coming out again?"
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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 10:16 am
Tamith the Cpt stoped the doors, "well, it looks like you decided not to get roasted" the cpt said. he led her into the hanger bay"and if i would kill you, it wouldnt matter, i could say you fell."the cpt sneered. he led he through a room and inot what looked like a long hallway, that streached on forever. it had tracks like a railroad, and a cart, that had six seats in it. they all got in, the gaurds and the cpt, she was chained onto the back opening of the cart. when the gaurd pressed a button the cart flew ahead. it went about 25 miles an hour. after a couple hours the cart screached a stop. they all got out, "so, how do you plan on escaping, when the tunnul is about 143 kilometers?"the cpt said as he stood her up.
"Maybe I don't."
She smiled and nodded to the girl that started talking to her.
"Jessica."
She replied simply.
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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 10:54 am
she smiled at Jessica, and looked at the captain, and asked again,
"how many more minutes until you release the hounds again?"
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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 11:20 am
(( theres no rule bout this but um.
does anyone wanna rp as a guy in the War of the Wampires?
its one of the oldest rps in the forum and will only accept one more guy to join o.o'
read the front page and pm me if ur interested? ))
Her eyebrow went up at Aubry's question.
"Hounds?"
She asked in a retorical way.
She turned to the captain, who was still there.
"And are you going to get this off any time soon?"
She said, gesturing to her handcuffs.
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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 11:55 am
looking at Jessica, she answered.
"hell hounds. they are trained to rip prisoners to shreds if they are not in their cells. and we are in war day, which is when the captain puts all the prisoners against each other, and they try to take an orange tag away from you. whoever has the most, gets a special treatment of being spoiled for the rest of the day..." she took out her small orange piece of paper.
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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 3:04 pm
hte cpt looked at aubry throught the rows of gates blocking her. "im relesing the hounds in...*lookes at an imaginary watch*...........wow, im late! i was suposse to relese them 10 miutes ago, he ucuffed the new girl and pushed her out the gates, then they were shut behind her.
"relese the hounds!" the cpt yelled smiling.
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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 6:54 pm
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