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 Posted: Sun Feb 17, 2008 10:04 am
Hawkpaw stubbled out of the den,wow that was one long napthought Hawkpaw to himself. "What's that noise,"said Hawkpaw to no one in particular. Hawkpaw looked around the camp in amasement.
((umm.. i have a working computer now so sorry for being gone so long. Can someone please give me a brief summary of what's happened because reading 7 pages is a little too much to handle?))
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Posted: Sun Feb 17, 2008 10:10 am
A certain scent defiled her presence. The scent the followed the color red... Minxpaw hissed, her first feral instincts rising deep inside her own innocent cathood as she writhed on the floor. Her heart jumped with fear as her jaws hung open, her teeth laced with blood. Her eyes were wide, as she writhed relentlessly causing some wounds to open. Anything that moved, anything, she reached out to swipe with her claws... Determined to fight, too afraid to realize that she was attacking her allies.
The dog reared up it's head, sizing up the small fluffball's that tasted alot like fresh deerhide. Seeing they were no immediate threat, he lowered his great muzzle and curled up his jaws. His eyes first caught Dragoneyes, then Lightface, Lightpaw and finally the writhing mass of flesh on the floor. Slowly, he stalked, his eyes concentrating on the closest cat. Deeming himself close enough, he snapped open his jaws to clamp on Dragoneye's brittle skull.
((Let's see... Hanuli got initiated into the clan and is now renamed Minxpaw. Then Apprentice/Mentor was assigned to cats which you will indicate who's with who in a later time. So basically, what's going on now is that Dragoneye was planning to show Minxpaw the perimeter of their lands but she ran off to look for her 'mother' in Twolegged lands and got the snot beaten out of her by a little kid and her parent. Then she was stupid enough to challenge a Doberman. Oh and Smallstar is heading his way back into camp for Poppy seeds. Reinforcements are needed to fight a slightly staggered Doberman.
So let's start from there. ;D))
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XThe Lily Of The ValleyX Crew
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Posted: Sun Feb 17, 2008 10:14 am
(( I think you were on long enough for Hanuli to come. Hanuli was named Minxpaw, her mentor was Dragoneyes. They went out to explore the territory. Minxpaw ran into Twolegplace to find her mom, where a Twoleg kit found her and Minxpaw scratched the kit, and the kit kicked her. Minxpaw scratched harder, and the kit howled. A big twoleg came, and kicked her. Minxpaw wandered into an alley way, where she had gotten into a figh with a dog, who chewed her tail off and other injuries. Lightface, who was with Dragoneyes, came over and rushed back to camp to get herbs, but forgot poppy seeds. Lightpaw and Smallstar arrived, and Smallstar ran toget poppy seeds, but broke his paw on the way, but is still getting the seeds. Hanuli is having dreams about her mom, and Dragoneys is going to fight the now-angry dog. Or at least getting ready to. Oops! Sorry, Minxpaw. You must've posted while I was writing.))
[color=red]Lightface sighed. "Minxpaw, stay still! You're just opening your wounds!" She meowed. She began to put more cobwebon, and mumured to Dragoneyes, "Be ready to fight, Dragoneyes..."
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Posted: Sun Feb 17, 2008 10:52 am
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Posted: Sun Feb 17, 2008 11:25 am
((I'm so sorry you guys! i feel like i missed everthing! crying but i got it... so sorry.))
Lightpaw didn't even have time to react before Smallstar was off. He was so fast. She stood closer to Dragoneyes, on guard and alert. A low growl erupted in her chest as she smelled the rank scent of dog. When the large black figure came into view and she caught sight of its bloody face she realized that it must have been the same creature that attacked Minxpaw.
Rage rippled through her and the instincts to protect her clan took over. Her claws were unsheathed and she pulled back her lips into a nasty hiss. Her hair stood on end as she subconciously tried to make herself bigger and more threatening. It wasn't like her to be stupid so she waited for it to make the first move. When the monster went for Dragoneyes she attacked. It was obliviously preoccupied and didn't see her leap from the ground claws outstretched. But it felt her as she ripped its back with her claws. She knew she couldn't kill something that big and powerful on her own but she insticntively went for its neck. Clamping on hard with her jaws and latching on with her claws to hang on for dear life as the beast thrashed around in pain.
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Posted: Sun Feb 17, 2008 12:27 pm
Dragoneyes moved her head out of the way just in time. She heard the snap right by her ear and jumped back quickly. As the dog thrashed from Lightpaw's attack, Dragoneyes saw her chance and swiped her paw across the dogs face, claws outstretched.
She went for his nose with another swipe, and hissed as she was hit by the dog's huge head and thrown a couple of feet. She sat up slowly, adreniline counter-acting the pain of a bleeding gash down her side. It seemed the dog's teeth had hit her when she was hit by its head.
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Posted: Sun Feb 17, 2008 1:06 pm
There was a loud yelp, echoing in the alleyway as the beast rolled on his back in an attempt to gain an edge of Lightpaw with it's weight. After the termite on his neck had eased, he rose up and propped up his shoulders and pounded his nose on the ground, where Lightpaw was and uprooted a thick batch of grass from the specked Earth. Having a swift, yet powerful pedigree, it was a danger for any cat or medium sized creature to face alone. His teeth ached for blood, his lips curled into a smile and seemingly well supplied by the gashes bleeding down the sides of it's great head as the peeled skin on it's nose. He wasn't able to see, but his ears detected all, snapping at the general direction of Lightpaw, his dull pointed teeth could literally sever bones of a twolegger. If one cat was pinned, the chances of surviving without a lost limb or require a brand new set of intestines was slim even if reinforcements existed. Pain only fueled his hunger as the cat dander lingered from his fangs demanding retribution for his lost of sight. It remained all too quiet for a moment, Lightface, Lightpaw and Dragoneyes were hushed the only obnoxious sound was coming from Minxpaw.
He charged, indiscriminate as usual and aimed towards Lightface.
Minxpaw weakly swatted Lightface on the bridge of her nose, her hiss gurgling with blood as she tried to stand. She couldn't understand Lightface's commands, her body still in shock as it stole her sense of sight, dulled her hearing and impaired her judgment. Minxpaw couldn't use her lower legs, too exhausted to support the lower part of her body. The dull yowl of the dog rung in her ears as she curled her lips and exposed her light pink fangs.
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Posted: Sun Feb 17, 2008 3:17 pm
Draongeyes jumped at the dog, legs outstretched. She caught his back-left legs, and her claws hoked in skin. She pulled with all of her might. If the dog got to Lightface, they would have no medicine cat! Desperation fueling her movements, Dragoneyes bit deeply into the dog's leg.
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Posted: Sun Feb 17, 2008 4:23 pm
Lightpaw gave up her fruitless attempts at snapping the dog's neck and resolved to holding on for dear life. As Dragoneyes slashed at its face, it thrashed around even more, up and down, left and right, it would have made her sick if she hadn't been so scared. She didn't dare let go unless it tried to crush her. She hissed and clung as tight as she could while she was flung around on its back, narrowly escaping its snapping jaws.
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Posted: Sun Feb 17, 2008 4:53 pm
Hawkpaw didn't see anyone in camp so he ran out the camp entrance. He immediantly scented a cat's fear scent, following the scent he quickly reached Lightpaw and the others. Dog!!! This was bad and Hawkpaw could see that the others were pretty badly injured. The dog turned to face him,eyes bulging. Hawkpaw darted around the dog, making it chase him, finally he got behind the dog and lunged at it's back legs. This made the dog howl in pain and also seemed to make it madder. Darting away from the dog's legs, Hawkpaw jumped onto it's neck clamping down.
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XThe Lily Of The ValleyX Crew
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Posted: Sun Feb 17, 2008 5:41 pm
Lightface shook with rage, but she couldn't leave Minxpaw. "Minxpaw, how many times do have to tell you? Stay put!" She yowled. She turned around and mewed, "I can't do anything else without poppy seeds! I'll help fight!" She mewed anxiously. She ran to the dogs hind legs, and sank her teeth into them. She tasted the warm scent of blood.
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Posted: Sun Feb 17, 2008 6:24 pm
The Doberman yelped in fear now as a new cat had interrupted the fight. There were two clinging on his hind legs, and two on his neck. Having no vision was difficult as he bounded from her current position into a run as he nearly trampled Minxpaw. He sprinted in top speed before he quickly skidded on his back, not only raking himself but the two cats on his back. He was confused.. His location uncertain. He could hear bird cawing from above, the swaying of grass and the blowing of wind dulling his sense of hearing. He quickly rose up once again, imagining an army of cat's circling him slowly outnumbering him. There were teeth and claws latching onto him everywhere. It reeked of more then five different cats, nearly 6 as he tried to shake them off. Wanting to retreat back to the safety of his alleyway, he sprinted toward the direction of the town. However without his eyes, vision of where he was going was elusive. Unawaringly, his skull smashed into the side of the house, rattling his brain and his very existence. The dog collapsed onto the ground, it's body bleeding profusely.
Minxpaw continued to hiss, her body stilled propped up. Her eyes were wide with fury but couldn't see anything but blurred figures. Rats began to gather, making their way to the concentration of blood in search for food.
((I love making life hard. ;3))
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Posted: Sun Feb 17, 2008 6:26 pm
((I'm sooooo sorry! My mom was being stupid and wouldn't let me on the computer!))
Smallstar painfully limped into the camp. Nobody was there. Hawkpaw must have gone somewhere. When he reached Lightface's herb storage, he grabbed some poppy seeds and tried to run out of the camp again. Racing across the moor with a bad feeling in his stomach, he jumped more than ran. The Towlegplace loomed over him as he reached the group. The bad feeling in his stomach was explained when he saw the dog, with Hawkpaw, Lightpaw, Lightface, and Dragoneyes attacking it. He threw the poppy seeds from his mouth next to the injured Minxpaw. He limped over to the fight and threw himself into it, biting at the dog's leg.
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Posted: Sun Feb 17, 2008 6:41 pm
Lightface screeched. "Rats! I have the poppy seeds now, I'll feed them to Minxpaw!" She glanced at the two cats on the dogs back-they seemed to have gotten a few bruises and such, but nothing too serious, but still had to be treated. Same with Smallstar. "That makes everyone injured..." She mewed, weary. She raced over to Minxpaw and stuck the seeds in her mouth, and watched as she slowly began to go into a deep sleep. "W-We can go now! Hawkpaw! Help me with Minxpaw!"
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