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 Posted: Tue Jul 24, 2007 2:14 pm
Forever More
Forever more will the Earth lie dead Forever will the winds of
time whisper about the long past
Forever more will the ruins of the decadent past remain empty
Only the shadows of the dead
walk the broken and twisted halls now
Forever more will the shadows of darkness haunt the dead fields
Forever will the ground lay dry but blood soaked
Forever more will the forests lay blackened
never to see a spring rain come again
never to see a hopeful sapling begin to grow
Forever more will the forests cry in silent tearless agony
Forever more will the Earth be tormented with the knowledge
that its children caused its suffering
Forever more will the Earth cry out into the limitless vacuum
for salvation that will never come until it is
engulfed by the dying Sun alone and dead
Forever more will the Earth be alone
until deaths fiery grip
Will it?
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Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2007 9:35 am
I love free verse poems. I think your's is awesome. I like your rhythm and flow. Very unique.
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Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2007 7:49 am
Motionless
Staying still,
no speck of breath, of step, of life.
It’s brutally cold,
Its iciness, it kills.
Nowhere to go…
Just you, yourself in fear…
But in your mind questions overflow.
Try to take a step
but fear is in your feet…
Try turning your face
but your skull is just too weak…
Suddenly in the midst,
you hear a grimly glee of sound.
The breaths it takes are…
surely slowing down…
It comes so closer
your anxiety to leave is bound…
But, what to do?
You’re stuck; you’re lost, alone…
Suddenly you feel one hand
creeping on your shoulder…
Its grasp is hard…
You’re under its lure…
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 7:20 pm
these two poems are very nice. Great job
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Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2007 7:34 pm
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Posted: Sat Oct 13, 2007 2:03 am
Those are really fantastic! Here is one I came up with sometime ago, sorry it's a-bit long :
I STAND
I stand
Over the shattered remains
Of a broken World
The tears of others
Gather like seas
They reflect their pain
Their sorrow
Their Hope
I breathe
For the hearts of the broken
The souls of the damned
For the peace of those who have hurt me
And I have hurt in return
In the blindness
Of tourniquet
I reach
For those who have fallen
Those angels who lost grace
Lost touch with the reality of joy
I try to touch them
But they fade
Like the dreams of a sleeping soul
Only to reappear, later
To reach out again
I cry
For those who have cried
Their tears shatter my skin
Like the claws of demons
Raking at me
To become
Like them
In every aspect
I fall
To save myself
To lose my insanity
In the blood-red halo of the night
In the stone coffin in my heart
For you
For us
Sleeping together forever within the endless night of my pain
Our Pain
Their pain
My beauty
Our beautiful suicide.
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Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2008 2:55 pm
Mine Is short I just came up with it heart Untitled heart
Your hair is as yellow as straw,
As soft as a puppys paw,
But when you look down,
I frown
Because I can't touch your face,
That keeps beauty in place.
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Posted: Mon Oct 06, 2008 7:21 pm
Those are really good. Here's one I wrote. Forget Him
Forget his name
Forget his face
Forget his kiss
His warm embrace
Forget the love you once knew
Remember he has someone new
Forget him when they played your song
Remember when you cried all night long
Forget how close you once were
Remember he has chosen her
Forget how you memorized his walk
Forget the way he used to talk
Forget the things he used to say
Remember he has gone away
Forget his laugh forget his grin
Forget the way he held you tight
Remember he's with her tonight
Forget the time that went so fast
Forget the love that moved, its past
Forget he said he'll leave you never
Remember he's gone forever
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Posted: Sat Oct 11, 2008 9:08 pm
That's a very nice poem lilgraywolf, I love how well you rhymed. I do believe that there is a typo though. Unless it's supposed to say walk twice.
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Posted: Sat Nov 01, 2008 5:07 pm
I have a few of my own that I rather like. And I have gotten one published, the first one =3
Her Broken Heart
Tears rolling down her cheeks
The ache in her heart peaks
She's crying endlessly
She hates him for eternity
"You broke it" she screams
He doesn't care it seems
She's screaming and sobbing
Her pain is throbbing
Her heart is broken abd bleeding
Her pain continues and is exceeding
As she cries herself to sleep
Not to be heard, not another peep
Lost Time
Time we once had
But will no longer share
You now only see me as bad
And don't seem to care
I've lost all that mattered
But you go on
My heart is shattered
Because of our broken bond
Perhaps in the end
We'll both find what we need
Since we can no longer be friends
And on anger and hate we both feed
Chaos
Scurrying quickly
Don't want to be late
Detention may come
That I would hate
Better hurry now
Don't want to miss class
So much to do, so little time
Man, what a pain in the a**
Moving faster
These halls are Hell
Walk in, sit down
Phew, there's the bell
Sorry if they seem a bit sad....it's when I write them....when I'm sad that is. I have more but I didn't want to type them all up right now. =3 Enjoy~
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Posted: Mon Dec 29, 2008 8:10 pm
*
my life started with you
my life started with you
a lonesome girl
sitting on a swing
when i became friends with you
we never parted ways
my life emptied when you left
and we were altogether
lonesome again...
never to find
each other
my life soars with yours
my self sitting
slowly dying on the inside
when you came to me
you smiled and sat with me
my life became warmer when we confessed
you loved me so much
and i loved you back
and i got
my first kiss
my life sleeps with yours
we both spent
an eternity together
and finally...
we both died together..
and our love still
holds stronger
within heaven
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Posted: Thu Jan 01, 2009 1:52 am
that made me crybut i like it.
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Posted: Fri Jan 02, 2009 8:11 pm
I see you walking through the halls and my heart skips a beat
I see your smile and my heart flutters
I see you smile at me and I smile back, dumbly
I see you walk over and I feel like fainting
I notice how you are stuttering over words when you speak to me, and it makes me feel better
I see you with her, your arm around her, and her happy, and my heart breaks.
All I can think about is you,
The boy who stole my heart without knowing it
You see me as a friend, but I see you as more than that,
As my lover, and me your lover, happy and together
Your smile makes me smile and my heart flutter like a dozen butterflies' wings
You walk over and my heart skips two beats
You talk a normal conversation, but I daydream of a conversation between us, if we were more than what we are
Then, I hear you have a girl, and my heart tears and I feel pain, so much pain.
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Posted: Fri Jan 16, 2009 7:43 pm
Title:The Name of the Game is Misery
if Misery ever had a closer friend that would be me.
Everyone says Misery loves company
So I heard.
Misery and I were once close friends.
We used to hang out on broken dreams blv.
And believe it or not we enjoyed our insanity.
So yeah, I've heard Misery is looking for me.
Misery will not meet with me today.
I will take part in her sick game.
The rules she follows by is a long, twisted road.
It only leads to hanging from a rope.
The track marks on my arms have faded away,
I've seen enough to know that beautiful things don't always stay that way
So if you've heard that Misery will one day calm the sky,
just remember that I'll stay in the light.
Today is the day I ran away from Misery.
I finally escaped,
I'm in a better place now
And I hope one day you get away,
just not the same way as I
with your heart face down,
and the bullet towards the sky...
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