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Goarmy Pikiwanis

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Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 7:27 pm

I just made this up. whee What do you think?

This late summer night
Cool, Breezy
Standing on my balcony
I can take on the world
At twilight

Posted: Thu Feb 15, 2007 1:53 pm

I love the idea, but the last line's a bit off. Only because you've already said it's night. heart Maybe a new something?

Voxxx

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Reese_Roper

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Posted: Thu Feb 15, 2007 4:05 pm

I understand why.

See, she wrote that for Creative Writing, and our teacher said our format had to be:

Topic Title
Two Describing Words
Action
Feeling
Synomyn of First Line

EDIT: Synonym. Darn dyslexia! gonk

Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2007 5:56 pm

I like it.

I got a really good mental image of what you were describing.

Spastic waffles
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