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 Posted: Mon Sep 25, 2006 9:55 pm
I'll make my 'first post' gallery-thing after this at some point.. :/ So I'm taking a whack at Raesha's most recent art contest... And I often have anatomy issues that I don't notice until post-entry, sooo.... Anything is welcome, everything can be changed if it needs be. C: It's sort of faint though, I haven't darkened the lines yet, and my scanner is trashy, but yes.
My own concerns are her face and her hair, her face just looks off-balance to me, and I'm not sure how to fix it, and her hair is looking a little "Goku-esque"...Old VersionNot-so-old versionThe only changes I made was to the right hand and the left breast. I made the hand smaller and changed it's position. I think it still needs work though. >_< Dark linesI made the lines darker, and added some fruity gusts of wind in the background.  Finished it. Hate the hack-job colours. And the face. Still would enjoy crits on it though.
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Posted: Mon Sep 25, 2006 10:00 pm
It's very hard to see this image. Can you up the contrast a bit?
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Posted: Mon Sep 25, 2006 10:16 pm
Done. Try to ignore the painfull pink and yellow streaks.. :/
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Posted: Mon Sep 25, 2006 10:52 pm
The right hand bugs me. It seems too big and oddly angled.
Edit // Her right I mean.
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Dr. Valentine Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Sep 25, 2006 11:43 pm
Linework is nice and clean, however she's rather stiff lookin Nozomi....also, re left boob is smaller than the right one! D8
Just noticed this, you kinda have some tangents forming up with the arms and the skirt, and the thing floatin behind it.
rock!
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Posted: Wed Oct 04, 2006 10:02 pm
her arms are very large and heavy looking. They are either too large/long for her body or her legs need to be brought up to scale.
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