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 Posted: Sat Jun 03, 2006 6:31 pm
My blood turns to ice
A Demons device
to hold me under murky waters
And as it begins to melt beneath my skin
I wonder
Is that your voice I hear
Calling me
CHORUS:
I'm lost in you
Drowning
Just trying to get away
You take my breath and my words
It would be no use to say
You know and I know
I'm lost in you
I resist your sin
but my dark blood within is still frozen
from your touch
I'm swallowing teardrops as sowly my heart rots
I know
It was your laughter
Mocking me
CHORUS
I'm lost, I'm lost in you
I will never get out
I'm lost in you
My heart is rotting and bleeding
You're beating me down and I'll never get out
I'm lost in you
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Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 12:14 am
I like it but I feel it needs to be a bit longer, and I can't seem to decifer if there's a rhyme scheme or not. But the meaning is clear and the word choice is excellent. Overal it gets a Laharl thumbs up!^^~
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Posted: Fri Jun 23, 2006 5:17 am
I like it! After test singing it, I approve!
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