Story Arcs are for your Character only. Do not reply in someone else's arc, Story arcs are different from the roleplaying room. Here are some simple rules to follow:

#1 Do not reply in someone's story arc!!
#2 no short replies, all chapters for you character arc must be at least 3 to 4 paragraphs long
#3 Use proper grammer, do not use texting words
#4 Use color points when your character(s) are talking (example: "This is going to be one helluva party!" exclaimed Dante as he smiled holding Ebony and Ivory)

I will not judge your character arcs, since they are your own. But I will pm you if something is wrong with your arc. (mostly grammer correction and so on) Either than that, have fun.