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toto45
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 06, 2011 7:33 am
You said that you knew me
But I know you don't care
If someone asked you my name
I'd be the chick with blue hair.
I have my own sense of style
But you are a mannequin freak
You think you're all that
And I know that you are weak.
I'm just a girl with a doll in her hands
This doll actually walks,
Talks, sings, and stands.
I could stab this doll once
And all my pain disappears
Because I am the one
That makes you cry all those tears.
Sculpting you into what
What you've become today
The one that is mocking me daily
You are just like the clay.
The clay that I've used
To make your life ruin mine
But what your life has become
Was all my design.
Because I'm just the girl with the doll in her hands
And you are the doll that walks,
Talks, sings, and stands.
I will make you do things
Things you won't comprehend
Because I will destroy you
You are dead in the end.
If you still think I'm weird
Take a look at yourself
I will show you the mirror
And put you back on the shelf.
Everything I do
Is everything you do
And all the things we do
Is all thanks to voodoo.
 
PostPosted: Tue Jan 11, 2011 4:35 pm
Wow, I really like you're poem. It's long and well written. Way to go! It just paints a pretty picture in my mind and just gets my creative mental juices flowing X3
Lol great work.  

Hammalea

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