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 Posted: Tue Feb 24, 2009 4:48 pm
(( She jumped in your mind? Wow. I wish I could jump and run around in people's head, Must be annoying. xd ))
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Posted: Tue Feb 24, 2009 4:51 pm
Thymen Ace was about to draw his sword too, but he noticed that the two other people in this stranger's presence were Allure and Cobra. So he didn't get his blade. "Ace Mistry." He said. A fake smile appearing on his face. He really didn't like his surname. "Impressive sword you got there" he said and waved to Allure. Ace now looked closer, and noticed that the colour(s) of this man's skin differed. Confusion could be seen in his face. You can't take the sky from me.
Salem Quickly sheathed his sword seeing the man wave to Allure.
" My apologies, one can never be too careful. Salem O'Mally, at your service. "
LoGA Vice Captain.
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Posted: Tue Feb 24, 2009 4:56 pm
((as in she was the first person she thought of XP silly))
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Posted: Tue Feb 24, 2009 4:59 pm
Allure was pleased to see Cobra yet completely confused.
"Hello Cobra. What in the world is going on? Last I saw you, you were headed to the authorities. Why are you now emerging from the ground?"
"This information....more trouble I assume. We've been through a fair share. What happened?"
Allure lost her train of thought once Ace landed near by. She also had no idea where he'd come from.
"So many surprises...."
She noticed Salem was on guard so she intervened, but he calmed so she didn't worry.
She turned to Ace,
"Hello there. Nice entrance. Where have you come from?"
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((Azure - Lol, nice. XD))
"Stronger than expected, " Clarissa said as she drew back.
She grabbed a broken branch on the ground and set it on fire.
She stuck her blade in the ground and broke the blanch in two. She carried once piece in each hand as she slowly moved forward.
She worked slowly as she waited for the branches to just be fire.
A large flame in each hand.
"I doubt you're strong enough though." She said while smiling.
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"Elite soldier of DeLeon miss. Who are you? Well, friend of Allure I realise. No now that that is why you now have me as an opponent....Prepare yourself."
She raised her sword and kept her feet light, ready to charge.
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Posted: Tue Feb 24, 2009 5:09 pm
Ace laughed a bit when he heard Allure's comment and pointed up.
He then thought for a second before replying, He wasn't sure if he should tell this. But there was nothing there anymore either way.
"Scarlet Rivers. Fire-elve island. Sadly, none of them are left. Only two remain"
He walked past Salem, looking back to make sure that Ace'd be safe. Ace wasn't one to judge on looks. But something about Salem made him feel uncomfortable.
"Something's going on at the woods not far from your home. Must be some children playing tag or something. It distracted me.
Lost balance"
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Posted: Tue Feb 24, 2009 5:20 pm
Veronica glared, her eyes growing red and slowly approaching the soldier,"i am Veronica, owner of the place you just broke into. and yes i am a friend of Allure," she drew her dagger and paused a few steps away from the girl.
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Posted: Tue Feb 24, 2009 5:39 pm
"Ah, so that was it." She laughed at the thought. "How easily distracted."
Her face became more serious then.
"You need be careful though. Times are now dangerous. People see you act abnormally and you're a dead man."
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"A nice place you have" Alicia said with a fake smile. She picked up a vase from the table.
"So pretty..." She crushed the vase in her hand. The flowers fell and water spilled all aound her.
Her eyes became a light blue and she drew forth several ice shards from the water. In a moment, they were thrust towards Veronica. ((Sorry, I'm feeling hellish. Leaving for now. Be back soon hopefully.))
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Posted: Tue Feb 24, 2009 5:39 pm
*Raida walks up to Allure, Cobra, and Ace*
"Lets see... yeah... the descriptions match.... sweet..."
*I look up and hold out my hand to Allure*
"Hello, I'm Raida. I assume that you're Allure? I was just over at Vash's taking care of some 'business' when I took a peek at his records, and saw that he had some notes on people with powers so I figured, meh what the hell. So, here I am. Nice to meet you"
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Posted: Tue Feb 24, 2009 5:44 pm
Ace quickly turned his head towards the stranger.
It didn't take long for him to notice that this wasn't a friendly business talk he had.
Ace noticed blood dripping from the sword on Raida's back.
'No, he didn't!' Ace inmediatly thought.
"Business, with Vash, you say?"
(( You really need to start writing in third person. Instead of "I do this, I do that" write "Raida does this, He does that"))
(( I assumed that he still wears his "Working clothes" Since he just finished a job))
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Posted: Tue Feb 24, 2009 5:50 pm
((no, he's wearing the normal clothes, he prefers to wear them if he can just come up to them and talk, but if he has to storm a fort, he wears the work clothes, but he does have a bloody sword strapped to his back...
also, I prefer to write in first person, it lets me get into the game more))
"Yeah, I was hired to kill him... anyway, I guess your Ace, nice to meet you. His notes spoke about you more in depth then the others, I guess since he worked more closely with you then the others, he had more time to study you... Anyway, its nice to meet you too"
*He holds out his hand*
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Posted: Tue Feb 24, 2009 5:58 pm
((Still, it's very confusing to read it that way, for others))
"You son of a b***h!" He said as he drew his sword, Inmediatly flames emerged from it. He got ready to attack.
"Who hired you!?"
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Posted: Tue Feb 24, 2009 6:08 pm
Thymen Ace was about to draw his sword too, but he noticed that the two other people in this stranger's presence were Allure and Cobra. So he didn't get his blade. "Ace Mistry." He said. A fake smile appearing on his face. He really didn't like his surname. "Impressive sword you got there" he said and waved to Allure. Ace now looked closer, and noticed that the colour(s) of this man's skin differed. Confusion could be seen in his face. Straven had been sitting on a nearby building. If Cobra really believed he was sleeping, then he wasn't as smart as Straven thought. But as soon as he heard Ace say his last name, Mistry. Something snapped. The always calm Straven was suddenly a raging bull. That guy, was family from him who killed Straven's parents!? He shall suffer. Straven launched himself at Ace, it all happened in a flash. As if a thunderbolt shot from the roof.
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Posted: Tue Feb 24, 2009 6:11 pm
Ace had fallen to the ground, wondering what just happened. He thought it was that assassin at first, but he was still standing there.
But as soon as he turned around pushing Straven away, he noticed who it was.
It was that guy front the 'Wanted' Poster(s) he'd seen all over the place.
"You're not stealing anything frome me!" He said as he reached for his sword and crawled up, But as soon as he got up, Straven had already blown the weapon out of Ace's hand.
Ace narrowed his eyes.
"What do you want"
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Posted: Tue Feb 24, 2009 6:12 pm
Veronica puffed up as she saw the girl destroyed a vase she had picked up in china a few years back,"your not welcomed here, leave," she said as she slashed the air, causing a flame to melt the ice, leaving a hissing noise that mite as well came out of Veronica mouth , with the way she was feeling.
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