FREE 10000 Gold to writer. Ends sep. 12

[Madame_Raine]

You heard it right, folks. Are you a gaiaholic seeking 10,000 gold for that supercool outfit? How about a brand new moon latern for 2nd place? Well It's your lucky day. Write me a poem describing a tale of your avi or dream avi and post a picture of your dream avi if possible. The story must be no longer than 1000 words but no less than 200, and of course grammer and spelling will be counted. If I find you have plagiarized a story, (which, in my experience, is never the best idea), I will most certainly disqualify you. The contest rules are below. Good luck and I wish all of you the best of luck. This contest will be closed by september the 12 so hurry. The clock is ticking.

CONTEST RULES:

1. No copying off of someone else.

2. No excessive use of improper language.

3. No insulting or calling each other names. Competition is good but lets be nice it's just virtual gold.

4. Have fun and enjoy yourself while writing! Make the avi poem come to life in front of others eyes and mine. Good luck.

[AzzyBelle]

Do we have to pm them to you or post them right here?

[Madame_Raine]

Post them right here when you are ready. The poem/story has to relevant to your Avi.

[SouthernGurl87]

I surfed the Gaia stores,
found many things I loved.
Did my best to earn some gold,
to buy the CoCo Plush.
I know that I should wait,
and let the gold come to me,
but in this case I really mean,
I REALLY NEED SOME GREEN!!!

Lol (: I really suck at poems and stories. (:

[pantsu pirate]

I Will Enter biggrin

[pantsu pirate]

As she sings
Her song of death
Shadows sway
Her violin begins to play
in an deep sad note
For all to hear
She stands
Over top a massacre
Bodies after bodies lay
A bloody wing waves in the air
Than wips the blood cleanly off the wing
Her hand moves towards her left eye
Where a skull eyepatch lay
And slowly fell off
Revealing a red rose
matching her right red eye
Laughter filled the air
As she stood upon the slowly decaying bodies
Her eyes full of insanity
With her cruel smile laugh
Her wings spread wide
Than made her way into the air.
- Zaki

[rachachi]

Perfection

Until the mask

f
a
l
l
s

Too much pressure

to be perfect

cracks the mask

Perfection

Unobtainable

But still trying

To prove

To be loved

Behind my mask

-Rachachi

[AzzyBelle]

Born, from Mother Nature, a small red-headed baby girl, with ocean blue eyes,
is born into this world. She bares no clothes, she is a calm and quiet sleeper.

She dreams of a peaceful world, with no suffering. She walks with such grace, as if
she weighs lighter then a feather in the breeze. Her voice is soft and warm like
the softest blanket out of the dryer.

Her smile is as sweet as an angels. There are rainbows that always trail behind her. She wears a white rose in her hair with a golden beads around her head.


She was taught to love everything and everyone; to treat everyone equally unconditionally. She's grown up in the forest and learned the language of nature and the animals. Ivy Vines cover her body, and she sleeps beneath the stars every night.

The animals help her harvest food and protect her from the cold. Her skin is soft
and is light as the moon on a lunar eclipse. Her eyes shine brighter then the
brightest stars from the clearest nights.

Someday, she hopes to help the world in seeking peace, without suffering. She wants to help make a difference in this world.

She is said to be a spirit in the forest that helps lost travelers back on their way home, this of course is just a myth. She is just Mother Nature's Daughter, trying make a difference, help the world, and to help everyone and everything in it.

[supergirl10895]

(Deathly White and Cold)
You never see me coming...
(and when the chill sets in)
You'll wish you had gone running...

Surely you've been told....
(Gray eyes that seem so sinister)
I'm the master of the cold...
(The lady of the Winter)

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Darn. D: the avie doesn't really match the poem now that I see it....
oh well.

[RosesFallingLikeRain]

The day she snapped
The earth had cracked
Their lives became no more.

Her mind had slipped
She lost her grip
And then the flames began to soar.

She lost her mind
And you will find
There was a lot of gore.

The flames didn't stop
This anger, she wouldn't drop
Evil had reached her core.

One by one
They were soon all done
Soon, only four.

They cried and cried
Tried to decide
Who would live forevermore.

Fire and more fire
Her anger rose higher
Until it became nothing but lore.

The stories tell
Of a real life hell
Lived by a girl, never adored.

So do not tease
Or ever release
Your anger towards another.

You could wind up like her
With no way to cure
Your anger and lust for gore.

She was alone
Regretting not what she had done
To the last of those four.

Chased to the top of a mountain high
The first thing gone was the lid of her eye
less and less of who she was before.

No one knew the signs
Knew when she crossed the lines
And that had caused a war.

Now they know
And they're starting to show
It won't be allowed anymore.

Current ord count: 164

[Madame_Raine]

RosesFallingLikeRain

The day she snapped
The earth had cracked
Their lives became no more.

Her mind had slipped
She lost her grip
And then the flames began to soar.

She lost her mind
And you will find
There was a lot of gore.

The flames didn't stop
This anger, she wouldn't drop
Evil had reached her core.

One by one
They were soon all done
Soon, only four.

They cried and cried
Tried to decide
Who would live forevermore.

Fire and more fire
Her anger rose higher
Until it became nothing but lore.

The stories tell
Of a real life hell
Lived by a girl, never adored.

So do not tease
Or ever release
Your anger towards others more.

You could wind up like her
With no way to cure


What I have so far.

This is a promising poem. BTW, To all other contestants thank you for your submissions! biggrin Theres a ton of talented writers here!

[Madame_Raine]

supergirl10895

(Deathly White and Cold)
You never see me coming...
(and when the chill sets in)
You'll wish you had gone running...

Surely you've been told....
(Gray eyes that seem so sinister)
I'm the master of the cold...
(The lady of the Winter)

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Darn. D: the avie doesn't really match the poem now that I see it....
oh well.

OOOOOO N-ICE. smile I love the ending and your style of poetry and the parenthesis.

[Madame_Raine]

Zaki Hatakke

As she sings
Her song of death
Shadows sway
Her violin begins to play
in an deep sad note
For all to hear
She stands
Over top a massacre
Bodies after bodies lay
A bloody wing waves in the air
Than wips the blood cleanly off the wing
Her hand moves towards her left eye
Where a skull eyepatch lay
And slowly fell off
Revealing a red rose
matching her right red eye
Laughter filled the air
As she stood upon the slowly decaying bodies
Her eyes full of insanity
With her cruel smile laugh
Her wings spread wide
Than made her way into the air.
- Zaki

Another promising entry! Wow you guys are awesome.

[Madame_Raine]

Azlein

Born, from Mother Nature, a small red-headed baby girl, with ocean blue eyes,
is born into this world. She bares no clothes, she is a calm and quiet sleeper.

She dreams of a peaceful world, with no suffering. She walks with such grace, as if
she weighs lighter then a feather in the breeze. Her voice is soft and warm like
the softest blanket out of the dryer.

Her smile is as sweet as an angels. There are rainbows that always trail behind her. She wears a white rose in her hair with a golden beads around her head.


She was taught to love everything and everyone; to treat everyone equally unconditionally. She's grown up in the forest and learned the language of nature and the animals. Ivy Vines cover her body, and she sleeps beneath the stars every night.

The animals help her harvest food and protect her from the cold. Her skin is soft
and is light as the moon on a lunar eclipse. Her eyes shine brighter then the
brightest stars from the clearest nights.

Someday, she hopes to help the world in seeking peace, without suffering. She wants to help make a difference in this world.

She is said to be a spirit in the forest that helps lost travelers back on their way home, this of course is just a myth. She is just Mother Nature's Daughter, trying make a difference, help the world, and to help everyone and everything in it.

This story is relevant to the avatar. biggrin Great work. wink