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Post: 678170_1 created on Wed, 14 Jan 2004 00:19:17 +0000
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Post: 678170_2 created on Wed, 14 Jan 2004 00:47:57 +0000
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A Knight of Doleful Countenance by Djen (listed by Hawthorne)

Master's Heart by Meh Misery listed by Meh Misery

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Post: 678170_3 created on Wed, 14 Jan 2004 00:49:52 +0000
Posted: Wed, 14 Jan 2004 00:49:52 +0000

Magnum is back - bitches.

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The house was ransacked, the place was trashed,
It's door was kicked in, it's windows smashed.
The fiend who did this got away clean,
All that was left was his damage to be seen.
I found myself in shock at what I was seeing,
In disbelief from such an inhuman thing.
All this time unable to say a word,
Your place smelled of memories, your voice I heard.
All the times we spent alone,
In this rubble of an old loved home.
You, still as beautiful as last time,
Lay as a masterpiece, the artwork of a crime.
Blood had coated the walls and floor.
A bloody handprint was left on your front door,
from the culprit who committed this act.
I loved you. I don't know how to react.
I never had the chance to tell you how I felt,
Now there is just regret to be dealt.
You were God's work of art.
Forever will be known to me as the girl who had my heart.
Goodbye forever.
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Post: 678170_4 created on Wed, 14 Jan 2004 00:53:34 +0000
Posted: Wed, 14 Jan 2004 00:53:34 +0000

ooo, looky, blank space!

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Post: 678170_5 created on Wed, 14 Jan 2004 00:54:35 +0000
Posted: Wed, 14 Jan 2004 00:54:35 +0000

That looked like an impationate speach about something i didn't bother to read it but.......I guess there is no poin to this ciao

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Post: 678170_6 created on Wed, 14 Jan 2004 00:55:22 +0000
Posted: Wed, 14 Jan 2004 00:55:22 +0000

you're wearing a bow

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Post: 678170_7 created on Wed, 14 Jan 2004 00:56:37 +0000
Posted: Wed, 14 Jan 2004 00:56:37 +0000

and it's pink

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Post: 678170_8 created on Wed, 14 Jan 2004 01:02:27 +0000
Posted: Wed, 14 Jan 2004 01:02:27 +0000

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and it's pink

crying yes. i am aware...

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Post: 678170_9 created on Wed, 14 Jan 2004 01:04:44 +0000
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Rensuko

That looked like an impationate speach about something i didn't bother to read it but.......I guess there is no poin to this ciao

it has as much a point as the Stories/Prose Corner..... my message exactly. No one visits those people hard work, nor is there much of a life to this writer's symphony. 3nodding so i made a room, to represent such.

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Post: 678170_10 created on Wed, 14 Jan 2004 01:24:46 +0000
Posted: Wed, 14 Jan 2004 01:24:46 +0000

what's the matter with you to have written something like that?(just read speech) have you no friends? do you want me to be you're friend? your manifesto has brought a chill to my spine, and an emptiness in my heart. But then maybe it was already there, then mabe you put it there.........
in short i think I want your bow stare

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Post: 678170_11 created on Wed, 14 Jan 2004 01:27:41 +0000
Posted: Wed, 14 Jan 2004 01:27:41 +0000

No I don't want the pink bow stare I need a blue one b'cause blue is 4 boi's But right now i have to sighn off- I need sleep an it's late

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Post: 678170_12 created on Wed, 14 Jan 2004 01:28:20 +0000
Posted: Wed, 14 Jan 2004 01:28:20 +0000

Rensuko

hmm..... peculiar post. I dunno. i think we may share the same illness, if that is what we'll call the symptoms to our behaviors. If i inflicted this ailment upon you i apologize, i can't help but be liberal.

eek as for my bow............ yes, it is nice,......and pink.