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Post: 4985414_1 created on Sat, 11 Dec 2004 20:56:43 +0000
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Post: 4985414_2 created on Sat, 11 Dec 2004 21:07:23 +0000
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Well that was certainly different!

Good show, laddie! 3nodding Keep up the good work... *looks around for fellow critics* ...and don't worry, they'll come around... the critics I mean... blaugh

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Post: 4985414_3 created on Tue, 21 Dec 2004 02:05:48 +0000
Posted: Tue, 21 Dec 2004 02:05:48 +0000

Since this got knocked off the first page without people being able to read it, I guess I'll send it back up.

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Post: 4985414_4 created on Tue, 21 Dec 2004 02:35:46 +0000
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Wonderful! It's very Monty-Python-ish, don't you think? I love it - and as far as grammar and punctuation go, I didn't notice anything awry.

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Post: 4985414_5 created on Tue, 21 Dec 2004 21:50:31 +0000
Posted: Tue, 21 Dec 2004 21:50:31 +0000

strangeoid

Wonderful! It's very Monty-Python-ish, don't you think? I love it - and as far as grammar and punctuation go, I didn't notice anything awry.

Well that's good to know...
Now if only Gaia wouldn't be such a pain in making all the punctuation compatiable with their screwball servers that don't like the quatation marks.

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Post: 4985414_6 created on Mon, 27 Dec 2004 05:56:33 +0000
Posted: Mon, 27 Dec 2004 05:56:33 +0000

Ta da! see I told you I'd have to read your work in the thread of 'He died' Very interesting again! whee

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Post: 4985414_7 created on Tue, 28 Dec 2004 02:28:28 +0000
Posted: Tue, 28 Dec 2004 02:28:28 +0000

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Ta da! see I told you I'd have to read your work in the thread of 'He died' Very interesting again! whee

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Post: 4985414_8 created on Tue, 26 Apr 2005 06:45:20 +0000
Posted: Tue, 26 Apr 2005 06:45:20 +0000

Interest was expressed by some people in reading my works. I now move these to the top of page to make them easier to access.

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Post: 4985414_9 created on Fri, 29 Apr 2005 22:09:37 +0000
Posted: Fri, 29 Apr 2005 22:09:37 +0000

Oh my! I loved it. It reminds me of Monty Python...either that or the guys who wrote 'The Stinky Cheese Man' ....completely hilarious, kudos to u!

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Post: 4985414_10 created on Wed, 06 Jul 2005 22:00:30 +0000
Posted: Wed, 06 Jul 2005 22:00:30 +0000

Haha, this is hilarious. The first story I've read here that actually made me laugh out loud. Great job! whee

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Post: 4985414_11 created on Wed, 06 Jul 2005 22:13:08 +0000
Posted: Wed, 06 Jul 2005 22:13:08 +0000

*Applauds* The second good story I read on gaia. It was funny. Good job, please continue, naturally gifted etc. etc. Good job on ye mate. Keep up the good work.