I Luv all of them whee but #8 & 9 stood out, however, i liked 9 more because it captured the essence of the shojo beat girl, and looked more original. The yukata-kimono look is over played and is not really shojo beat-ish and has a hint of naruto in it.
Number 8! For Mana because the kimono and the character itself looks very very lovely drawn xD I love the outfit =3 and how the girl came out, very nice~ 3nodding
I like #'s 8 & 9... Hoever, #8 goes more with the Beat Girl image Chic and sensually flirtacious.
Whereas #9 is more of a cutesy chibi-ish looking girl.