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- Posted: Mon, 13 Feb 2006 15:43:00 +0000
Okay, everybody on this board seems to have a weakness for something. It may be vivid imagery. It may be colorful characters. Something that if the rest of the writing is just plain mediocre will make you crawl back wanting more. For me, it's an interesting perspective.
Now, let's take what we learned in school- 1st person, the narrarator is in the story and telling you what's going on, 2nd person, you are in the story, and 3rd person, you and the narrarator are outside the story. (I'm not even going to go into 2nd person because I've never read anything published in it)
But there's so much more to it that can change the whole thing. And what really bothers me is that most amateur writers just start in 3rd person omnicient (or, if they're 'devious,' 1st person limited) without thinking about it, or take an original perspective and simply use it as their one and only hook. Perspective should compliment the story, not be more important than it.
Take these into consideration; many a time have an intersting perspective been the saving grace of an otherwise dull story.
Now, onto the different types.
1st person limited: includes "diary format"
This is what most people use when they mean 1st person.
Advantages: can add spice to anything if you have an interesting enough narrarator
Disadvantages: you have to think too much. You have to wonder what they'll sound like all the time considering what education level they'll have, you'll have to reason out how perceptive they are, a lot of things that you can get away with in 3rd person omnicient are downright implausable in this perspective.
Notable examples: Catcher in the Rye, Jim Butcher's Dresden Files
1st person omnicient: "memory", "memoir", or "flashback" format, columnist format
This means that all events in the story are after the fact and the narrarator knows better. (I kinda made this up, if you can think up a better term, tell me)
Advantages: The narrarator is given more freedom to jump around, be forgetful, and etc. Pretty much everything in 1st person limited.
Disadvantages: Everything in 1st person limited AND tenses AND keeping straight what character knew at the time and what they know at time of story telling.
Notable examples: Cold Sassy Tree
1st person dual/multi limited: includes "correspondence" format
This means that you have more than one 1st person narrarator
Advantages: everything in 1st person limited, if you get bored with one, you can go ahead and switch to the other.
Disadvantages: You have to keep two viewpoints in your head without mixing them, everything in 1st person limited, AND you have to remember to switch to the other so your reader doesn't wonder, "what happened to the other guy?" every so often.
Notable examples: Dracula
3rd person limited:
You follow only one character around, only hear their thoughts, etc.
Advantages: you can jump to things that your main character doesn't know about without them going, WTF!!, your main character can still have their secrets, and so can everybody else.
Disadvantages: Even though everybody has their gives, you can't get into other people's heads. Your main character has to be interesting enough without him narrarating to get your reader's attention even when they're kept an arm's length away.
Notable Examples: A Series of Unfortunate Events, Harry Potter, many children's books
3rd person omnicient:
Everybody's fair game
Advantages: Just that- everybody's fair game- just because you still have a main character doesn't mean you can explore the depths of the other character's brains. You can also digress into things the character wouldn't notice at the time without the reader caring so much.
Disadvantages: it often sounds jumpy and disconjointed if you're not careful.You've still got to have control even though it allows you a lot of freedom.
Notable examples: Brian Jacques' Redwall series, Douglas Adams' Hitchhiker's Guide
3rd person dual/multi limited:
Like 1st person dual/multi limited, only more freedom
Advantages: You're almost gauranteed to have something interesting happening to one character, so there are no real slow points.
Disadvantages: see 1st person dual/multi limited, minus the parts on 1st person.
Notable examples: The Bartimaeus Trilogy, even though one viewpoint is 1st person.
3rd person dual/multi omnicient:
Like 3rd person dual/multi limited, only everywhere your followed character go you can hear everything.
Advantages: Your reader feels like they're getting a lot when you can still trick them and have secrets- good confusion of the reader. See advantages on 3rd person dual/multi limited
Disadvantages: you've got to restrain yourself from doing too much or else it'll just end up plain 3rd person omnicient.
Notable examples: some of Terry Pratchett's Discoworld Novels, though that's really stretching it.
Now, let's take what we learned in school- 1st person, the narrarator is in the story and telling you what's going on, 2nd person, you are in the story, and 3rd person, you and the narrarator are outside the story. (I'm not even going to go into 2nd person because I've never read anything published in it)
But there's so much more to it that can change the whole thing. And what really bothers me is that most amateur writers just start in 3rd person omnicient (or, if they're 'devious,' 1st person limited) without thinking about it, or take an original perspective and simply use it as their one and only hook. Perspective should compliment the story, not be more important than it.
Take these into consideration; many a time have an intersting perspective been the saving grace of an otherwise dull story.
Now, onto the different types.
1st person limited: includes "diary format"
This is what most people use when they mean 1st person.
Advantages: can add spice to anything if you have an interesting enough narrarator
Disadvantages: you have to think too much. You have to wonder what they'll sound like all the time considering what education level they'll have, you'll have to reason out how perceptive they are, a lot of things that you can get away with in 3rd person omnicient are downright implausable in this perspective.
Notable examples: Catcher in the Rye, Jim Butcher's Dresden Files
1st person omnicient: "memory", "memoir", or "flashback" format, columnist format
This means that all events in the story are after the fact and the narrarator knows better. (I kinda made this up, if you can think up a better term, tell me)
Advantages: The narrarator is given more freedom to jump around, be forgetful, and etc. Pretty much everything in 1st person limited.
Disadvantages: Everything in 1st person limited AND tenses AND keeping straight what character knew at the time and what they know at time of story telling.
Notable examples: Cold Sassy Tree
1st person dual/multi limited: includes "correspondence" format
This means that you have more than one 1st person narrarator
Advantages: everything in 1st person limited, if you get bored with one, you can go ahead and switch to the other.
Disadvantages: You have to keep two viewpoints in your head without mixing them, everything in 1st person limited, AND you have to remember to switch to the other so your reader doesn't wonder, "what happened to the other guy?" every so often.
Notable examples: Dracula
3rd person limited:
You follow only one character around, only hear their thoughts, etc.
Advantages: you can jump to things that your main character doesn't know about without them going, WTF!!, your main character can still have their secrets, and so can everybody else.
Disadvantages: Even though everybody has their gives, you can't get into other people's heads. Your main character has to be interesting enough without him narrarating to get your reader's attention even when they're kept an arm's length away.
Notable Examples: A Series of Unfortunate Events, Harry Potter, many children's books
3rd person omnicient:
Everybody's fair game
Advantages: Just that- everybody's fair game- just because you still have a main character doesn't mean you can explore the depths of the other character's brains. You can also digress into things the character wouldn't notice at the time without the reader caring so much.
Disadvantages: it often sounds jumpy and disconjointed if you're not careful.You've still got to have control even though it allows you a lot of freedom.
Notable examples: Brian Jacques' Redwall series, Douglas Adams' Hitchhiker's Guide
3rd person dual/multi limited:
Like 1st person dual/multi limited, only more freedom
Advantages: You're almost gauranteed to have something interesting happening to one character, so there are no real slow points.
Disadvantages: see 1st person dual/multi limited, minus the parts on 1st person.
Notable examples: The Bartimaeus Trilogy, even though one viewpoint is 1st person.
3rd person dual/multi omnicient:
Like 3rd person dual/multi limited, only everywhere your followed character go you can hear everything.
Advantages: Your reader feels like they're getting a lot when you can still trick them and have secrets- good confusion of the reader. See advantages on 3rd person dual/multi limited
Disadvantages: you've got to restrain yourself from doing too much or else it'll just end up plain 3rd person omnicient.
Notable examples: some of Terry Pratchett's Discoworld Novels, though that's really stretching it.