my problems:

[tweedrok]

ik i have a problem gonk
so i wrote a poem


I can't sleep
because I don't want to
There's just so many things I need to do in my life
Since my mind is a forgetful mind
the day today
will simply vanished
if I sleep away the few hours of this precious day
then tomorrow, I will have all six period anyway
so a sleepless night
is a small price to pay

[Urine Pot the Hero]

This is not terrible, because it's relatable.
There were other things I could have done with my time,
but I permitted you space inside my mind.
I don't think I regret it.
I think you get it,
what it's like to be a student and a poet.
Keep writing, keep practicing,
don't give up and maybe I'll keep commenting.
But work on your metaphors,
because paintings in words
are what we come here for.

[tweedrok]

from the time that I was born
a little voice told me to play
but what do i know or care
I was too mindless to reflect on yesterday
all day, i play and play and play
I never knew what life really meant
until I stopped living it
of course I still breathe and walk
but never living the present for more than mere seconds
I'm always daydreaming wide awake
and yet, I have always chosen the path that I take
from the time that I was born
until the day I've learn
that there is no return.