I finally finished writing a poem of mine, i would be happy if u can give me ur opinions about ^w^ :
Light and Darkness
Your life is like the night - As dark as being blind
Each day you go through - Filled with sorrow and lonliness
Sometimes you feel like ending your life - Just like the Falling stars
No one is there to support you - No one is there to watch over you
You're all alone in the darkness - Alone without anyone besides you
You try to cling to hope - But it just fades away
Just when all hope is gone - You felt a warm sensation in your hands
So warm yet so gentle - You opened your eyes
And you saw a girl - Crying while holding your hands
The girl knew how you felt - So she got closer to you
She embraced you gently - Your face on her shoulders
You began crying like a little child - While she stroked your head gently
She said everything will be ok - I will never leave you alone
You stopped crying and lifted your head up - Looking into those kind and honest eyes
She pulls your head towards hers - And kisses you gently on the lips
At that moment you believed - That she's the one and only person for you
The hope that you were searching for - The light that will break your darkness
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