Comments/critiques on my song?

[Chxsa]

You can find it here: https://soundcloud.com/vpolka/tribes-first-trance

[ozmo azarath]

not bad for a first time.
what gear do you use?
or do you just do it on the computer

[Chxsa]

ozmo azarath

not bad for a first time.
what gear do you use?
or do you just do it on the computer

I do it on the computer. O: I use FL Studio.

[tulin13]

Sounds pretty funky to me smile It'd make good game music.

I wasn't so found of the harsh repetitive synth that continued during 2:00 and comes back around 4:40. But it reminds me of the old altari and some retro games.

I like how you are not afraid to make dramatic changes in the music. I think that is a good thing.

[lx_Bow_xl]

nice