your opinion please~

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here I am again... xd
comments please... whee
especially on shading the hair and clothes sweatdrop



thanks for dropping by... biggrin

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cute.. whee

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thanks whee

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[freakyaliens]

very cute, I like the movement. I would practice more with your lifework, and your anatomy. There's something about this that makes it feel a little flat. don't be afraid to go all out with colors and shading and lighting.

Her hair seems very clunky too, try to practice individual strands? Or at least separate it a bit to give it even more movement.

And keep working with that anatomy!

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Ling_25_Xiaoyu

Your shading is coming along very nicely! biggrin The one thing that i do is use reference. I try to use the most realistic reference i can. a great reference for Manly muscles is Dragon age 2 shirtless guys @///@ they sure are buff.

For the hair is is a little..er..bold? I wanted to help and one way that i know how is through tutorials and i found one for you! biggrin biggrin I didnt read all the way through cuz im runnin outa time so here you may find this helpful! biggrin
HAIR KICKS GRAVITYS A*S
Or maybe this one?...
Yea just look around tutorials are a great way to learn new tips and tricks~! Experiment and have fun >w<

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J B Barnes

very cute, I like the movement. I would practice more with your lifework, and your anatomy. There's something about this that makes it feel a little flat. don't be afraid to go all out with colors and shading and lighting.

Her hair seems very clunky too, try to practice individual strands? Or at least separate it a bit to give it even more movement.

And keep working with that anatomy!

The same thing

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thank you all heart
i will practice more whee

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[Ayano Tsumari]

you're aready doing pretty good,
but try working on that anathomy,
drawing lots of circles as base and cirleing the joints can help
of course base lines are always erased, but i think everyone knows that already cat_sweatdrop
and for the rest, just keep practicing! art comes with the years~♪♫

good luck cat_3nodding

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Ayano Tsumari

you're aready doing pretty good,
but try working on that anathomy,
drawing lots of circles as base and cirleing the joints can help
of course base lines are always erased, but i think everyone knows that already cat_sweatdrop
and for the rest, just keep practicing! art comes with the years~♪♫

good luck cat_3nodding

thanks whee
i'm doing it when i'm bored though.. just for fun blaugh

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