Believe in my words

• Artist: Candyland x2
• Description: I girl is leaving because her boyfriend didn't fully understand who she was.
• Date: 03/23/2013
• Tags: believe words

Believe in my words when I turn to leave
It might take eternity until i succeed
I know how it feels to be left behind
You might not think by the way that I whine
Do you truly believe that our love was pure
I never felt fully secure
Believe in my words as I close the door
Because you won't be hearing them any more

Comments

[nightlydemond]

Just a minor suggestion, but you should check your tenses. I got a B in a poetry class because I'd lose my tenses sometimes and it practically destroyed my self-confidence.