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Can't See Tomorrow
when you can't see tomorrow, and all you see is pain,
when the end seems so close, the tears run like rain.
all that's within you, fights for one more breath,
seemingly useless, when the solution is death.
when you can't find your will, the drive to press on,
when the bitterness of life, shows you no dawn.
no end to this feeling, no break from the madness,
ripping you up, all that's left is the sadness.
when you can't feel anything, numb to the core,
when the life you once lived, is not your's anymore.
nothing is left, no meaning to this life,
empty, with no purpose, filled with inner strife.
when you can't see tomorrow, and all you see is pain,
let those who care, surround you, and pull you from the rain.
for those who stand beside you, love more than words can say,
and if you were to leave them, so much pain would never stray.
- by SHiNYxChaRizArd |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/11/2009 |
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- Title: Can't See Tomorrow
- Artist: SHiNYxChaRizArd
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Description:
i wrote this poem about suicide. i have thought about killing myself many times in my life and i always found a reason to push on; those i cared for. So, here's a poem that expresses how i feel when i think about suicide and how i, with the help from others, pull myself up and press on even when i can't see tomorrow.
This song by Rascal Flatts is amazing. it fits my poem wonderfully.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oXJquRA582s - Date: 10/11/2009
- Tags: cant tomorrow suicide
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Sora Kisaragi - 10/11/2009
- I read it in Japanese (I use gaia in japanese) and I cried. 5/5!
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- Rabbit Frenzy - 10/11/2009
- Its very dark once again but its also another amazing piece of poetic art. (also I better be one of those people that makes you push on Onee-Chan! XD) 5/5
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