You Promised But You Lied

• Artist: xXtorn_apart_heartXx
• Description: just another poem about my ex boyfriend how you like it
• Date: 07/22/2009
• Tags: liespromisesneverhurtingcrying

Promises never kept,
lies you always said.
Hurting hurting hurting,
crying crying crying.
No more smiles,
no more laughs.
Tears tears tears,
they constantly roll down my cheaks.
Forgivness is hard,
life is bleek.
Pain...the killer of the soul,
the myth of strength is the chaos of being whole.
Guilt is what you should feel,
you say you love me but it's never real.
Promises never kept,
lies you always said.
Hurting hurting hurting,
crying crying crying.
No more smiles,
no more laughs.

Comments

[Fck Ya Nikkas]

Hey thats how you fell when your around me. Just the not laughing part lol. Good poem sis.

[FoxfireAsaliEcara]

Good poem. Repeating words emphasizes the meaning, so I take it this guy really hurt you. Feel free to add me to your friends list. I too have had bad luck with love. In a different way though.

[ElectraShocked]

I like it, especialy the part "the myth of strength is the chaos pf being whole....


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[sycoskater]

i love the repetition its awesum

keep up the gs work hunn

[StNecro]

quite nice. try repeating your words a bit less.

allso its bleak, not bleek