Dispair

• Artist: Loralai Aya
• Description: I have felt this before, its a dark and cold one. this poem is a reminder of that feeling, and a hope in avoiding it.
• Date: 11/13/2008
• Tags: dispair

I here the song of hope,
but dark despair closes my ears.
leaving silence where melody reigned.
Did I ever hear this song?

I see the light of life,
but unto me is the darkness of death,
the light has fled me.
Was that light ever there?

I smell the fragrant flowers,
now the stench of death is nigh.
the odor of flesh falling away.
Was the fragrance real?

I feel the warmth of love,
yet I am filled with coldness.
sorrow has filled my heart,
Did I ever love?

I see the pleasures of this life,
falling away before the dark of deaths door.
Was it all a past memory?
... or maybe just a dream.

Comments

[Loralai Aya]

I use alot of old dialects in my writing, it gives me more of a connection to what i invision. Thank you for the complements and i am glad you enjoyed the poem

[Dragon_Fears]

I got a cold yet sad feeling when i read this and it was awesome.Its beautiful, your thoughts.

[minimel2]

wow this is pretty cool, I love the language you used and the cadence of the poem

[Bro_Army148]

this is really beautiful i luv things like this. ///*
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