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Counting, counting forever.
Waiting until it strikes; the time, and place.
Eyes closed; mind, a blank road
Leading to you, a faded figure in the distance.
Intoxicated by your being,
Awed by your wonder,
Relieved to see and feel
Your illuminating presence.
You make me feel
Like I am lost;
Like I can’t distinguish
Between what is real
And what is only a figment of my dreams.
You make me feel
like I have committed
to Hide and Seek
Where I must be able
to have the Desire
to have the Passion
to have the Capability
of striving for something, someone
Not a want, but a need
to become one with what
You cannot stand to be without.
Only then
Will you have the potential
to seek what is hidden
What is concealed by unknown impediments
With one single sinister intention,
Striving to prevent you
from comprehending the words
Desperately straining to be heard
by one individual soul.

- Title: Hide and Seek
- Artist: tomoniiki
- Description: a poem i wrote, expressing a love i had for my ex boyfriend
- Date: 07/22/2008
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Comments (3 Comments)
- ReYniK - 01/30/2009
- i dont really get it..but u expressed it excellently..pleasde rate n comment my poem..its a poem i made for sb i love far far away..haha..
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- MissMinxie - 07/22/2008
- Wow. That's really good.
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- Roux Arcus - 07/22/2008
- Nice poem, I like how you compare the feelings to the game, I think.
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