Those Eyes

• Artist: Mr_Blackdragon
• Description: Well, this poem is about a girl I know who I felt very strongly for. Um....I don't really want to go much further than that. Sorry. ^_^;; But yeah. It shows like what came over me when I saw her, and looked into her eyes. And no, I'm not telling the color. Keep that a mystery. ;O
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: those eyes

When I see you, I feel the pain.
The agony of knowing it's you I may never gain.
When I see you, I want to cry.
When I'm away from you, I want to die.
But, when I look into those eyes, away goes my grief.
And soon, my heart is filled with relief.
Those eyes are as magnificent as the sky above.
Those are the eyes of the one I love.
They let me know everything will be fine,
And they tell me the slim chance that she may soon be mine!
When I see those eyes, I am dumbfounded.
Yet, at the same time, I am astounded.
Her voice, like a thousand angels playing a thousand harps.
When I hear it, my heart stops, then eventually restarts.
Ah, my soul celebrates then cries.
All these emotions, when I look into those eyes.

Comments

[Omega Awesome]

I like it because, it tells what Im feeling for a girl.

[Dark Desire27]

cute i like it

[Vol Luminatio]

Not bad. o.o Impressive actually. Makes me kinda jealous that I can't write poetry. xDD

[Diamonds_and_Devils]

This is pretty good. It would have been a little better if you had separated it into stanzas, but it's pretty good otherwise. And I know how you feel.

[Angeladr7]

aw, that is a really great poem. It is so sweet. I bet she would have loved it, but i know you would not give it to her!

[Sir Chancellor]

wow . . . that's same thing with me . . . except i may never see her again . . . and have no chance in finding out if she likes me back

[xX-Her Game of B D S M-Xx]

Wow, this is a great poem. The eyes are a very beautiful part of the body, and they're often written about in poems. You took a something traditional and turned it into something that works for you. You have a five from me. ;D