my training

• Artist: NeverBornPain
• Description: (part2 of chapter0) the angel of death is showen me the ropes i cant have emotion but a good price for life
• Date: 10/04/2008
• Tags: trainingpart2 chapter0

the fire burns the ice freezes earth covers wind rips lightning shoksas well as elmmental powers ive grown cold empty my scythe is spelled see y the i dont know why he said that but ok guns are evil and never use one ive grown faster stronger but i still have a heart condition so i have a bio suit it seams evil but he said ill be able to fly soon so its been a loong 10000 (10 in your life) years but im readyand i finaly got my scythe and im ready-this is manga chap 1 will be out next mounth 3nodding well plz coment wat am i doing wrong

Comments

[bro mo dat chi]

WHERE ARE THE END MARKS, CAPITAL LETTERS!?!?! YOU NEED TO LOOK THROUGH THESE AND MAKE SURE THEY'RE NOT CRAP!

[eternalXheart]

good job!