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  • So Open Me Up Like Christmas
  • Title: So Open Me Up Like Christmas
  • Artist: - Jelleh - Bunny -
  • Description: From the song "S my D" by Blood On The Dancefloor.
  • Date: 06/12/2010
  • Tags: open like christmas
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Comments (3 Comments)
  • Phantom-of_Winter - 06/14/2010
  • -continued-
    the quality of your piece. For this artwork, it's not too bad but just be aware about this for your future pieces.
    Overall: You did a good job. Just remember about smoother lines and don't be afraid to add some light values. 3/5
  • Phantom-of_Winter - 06/14/2010
  • What I like about this: It's really adorable; very innocent looking. For the most part, the shading was done well (very smooth in some areas).
    What I think should be improved: Maybe brighten up some of the light values (or even add some to parts) so the character and the objects will stand out more. It also helps to show where the light source is. I might also suggest trying to make smoother lines. Now even though it may look unimportant, scratchy lines can be very distracting and can decrease
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