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  • Page 31 of P.V.S
  • Title: Page 31 of P.V.S
  • Artist: CuteyHoneyChan
  • Description: Here's the concluding page to Platinum VS Steel!
    Thanks so much for reading! Hoped you enjoyed it!
    Now I have to work on the NEXT one...(-_-);
  • Date: 02/06/2009
  • Tags: page manga platinum steel
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Angel Nicholson - 11/07/2009
  • Crap. The proportions, again, suck. Seriously, I know you want to, but don't listen to the guy below me. You can definitely do better than this. Seriously, just practice a shitload more and maybe I'll be more interested in reading it. You have potential, you just have to work towards it instead of parading this crap around and expecting people to like it and being so effing proud of it. You can seriously do better, you have talent.
  • Zuruiko - 08/08/2009
  • Seriously don't be so stuck up, Robertvilla-1. (Even if you slipped in a compliment, that wasn't too nice.) Send me a link, though, since you've interested me. :]

    Keep drawing comics! ^^ The body proportions are good, now try to make more poses and give the bodies more depth. Use real people for references~! (That's what my friend tells me all the time. ^^)
  • I The Author I - 07/31/2009
  • Ok, here's a FEW unanswered questions in the story.
    What year/time does the all occur? Why do they have swords? What's the plot? Why does the story end without any explanation as to the story?! I seriously wasted thirty good minutes reading this....this nonsense! I highly suggest working on your plotting and anatomies before you go ahead and make another one....like seriously.
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