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She stopped her walk in the misty alleyway as the man's voice behind her called out:

"Oh, you can't leave yet," his tone then turned malicious as he drew a knife from his pocket "the party wouldn't be nearly as fun without a precious body like yours around."

She smiled, then let out a short, yet cold laugh. "Okay, if you wanna play so bad, let's go."

She turned to face him, and the blood red brooch on her cloth strap that she called a shirt started to glow faintly. A black mist surrounded the two, and the sound from the cars in the street stopped. There was no noise form the apartment buildings they were between, the sirens of emergency vehicles stopped, he knew that they were the only two people there.

A faint purple light later, she had a giant shuriken mounted on her back and a scythe in her right hand. He tried to back away.

"Oh no, it's too late. You said you wanted to play." She took a step forward, and he ran. Down the alley, into another on the left. Adrenaline rushing through his system, he ran faster than he ever had before.

Even so, between fifteen and twenty feet into the new alleyway, purple and black flames flashed, and she was standing in front of him. He couldn't stop, not that he had time. With one flash, her scythe, he knew it's name, Purgatorio, descended upon him, leaving a mortal wound in his chest. It would kill him, if not instantly then through blood loss.

"You know why I hate this world?" She asked rhetorically as he fell into shock, "People like you. Who follow in the footsteps of Cain. Who kill others, be it for greed, pleasure, or vengeance. People who prey on those--"

And that was all he knew.

The police never found his killer. The investigation was dropped after two weeks, and picked up again when another victim was found. Both victims were known criminals. Murderers



I wrote that from 2-4 AM a little while ago, for my submission in the avatar arena. Check out the submission here.

http://www.gaiaonline.com//gaiaarena?mode=vote&postid=4783&key=56rgz6

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Hildechan

Report | 03/10/2010 11:42 am

Hildechan

Happy Birthday!
axiomatic d i s a s t e r

Report | 06/28/2008 6:36 pm

axiomatic d i s a s t e r

Meow.

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Gingerbread Dan~~~~
moosespitz

Report | 10/20/2007 6:57 pm

moosespitz

Thanks for buying from my shop! :]
Nave the Uke

Report | 09/03/2007 6:07 pm

Nave the Uke

*hugs* Hiya, just a random hug-comment.
Shayaryn

Report | 08/28/2007 12:52 am

Shayaryn

Hey Dan, I'm going to college in two weeks! xD And I'm typing this on my laptop that I got two weeks ago. I want a mouse. D:



Did you know that R.A. Salvatore is developing an MMORPG with Curt Schilling in Maynard? I wanna get an intership there. That would, put simply, PWN.



Last year I went to Colebrook, which is in Acton, and kinda like Victor, but more... Toned down. A bunch of kids were stoners, but they were cool. I really liked it there. I did alot better, too. I got honor roll every quarter! x3 My favorite teacher is in rehab at AA. D: But the kids there are really cool. One of my friends is Israeli, and there was this kid who fully embodied every gay stereotype. My bus driver thought he was a girl at first. xD



I've been addicted to Fire Emblem and The Wheel of Time book series. Sooo good. You gotta try it, if you haven't already. Hey, how's Hans? Is he still there?



Oh, the Friday before Gary was fired, I borrowed a book from him, "Cartoon History of the Universe". I decided to keep it. User Image Now Colebrook has it. User Image Colebrook is awesome. We had a culinary program where the kids made lunch, and it was usually pretty good. But we'd get "time outs" for swearing. Three meant an "in house", which was basically sitting in a small room for 45 minutes. And we had point sheets and a level system which was lame. xP But Colebrook was still pretty awesome. For my last math class, the teacher bout me icecream cake for my graduation, and we made D&D character sheets. User Image



If you want, I can pm you my cell phone number. Theresa stole my old phone, but I got a new one recently.
free_ronin

Report | 08/26/2007 3:05 pm

free_ronin

O RLY? quite funny grrr...
oONataLieOo

Report | 08/25/2007 4:51 am

oONataLieOo

VERY CUTE AVI!
yoni310218

Report | 08/23/2007 4:50 pm

yoni310218

how do you put stuff from like youtube on your profile?
inaccuracy228112

Report | 08/22/2007 10:03 pm

inaccuracy228112

random comment XD
Strerosh Frost

Report | 08/22/2007 3:30 pm

Strerosh Frost

You posted:

-Take off the gills, it's pointless with the

scarf there.

-The shadow spirit didn't even

register at first glance.

-See if you can

find a way to get a defferant lower face mask,

the scarf really clashes.

-What's thebrown

thing? It's kind of in the way, and clutters up

your space more.

-And lastly, although your

shirt is off, there's still too much concentrated

black. Use a secondary color



I thought a response may be nice...



-I forgot I had the gills on.

-Read the story and the shadow will register better.

-Same with the face mask...story is kinda important.

-The brown thing is the tail of the dragon, it doesn't come off.

-And the black is concentrated because I like the way the black looks.

Thanks for rating and commenting.