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My name isn't important, but I go by the nickname Red Velvet. I'm majorly into anime, specifially Rouroni Kenshin and Inuyasha. I live in the Southern half of the US and just enjoy writing, surfing the web and living life to the fullest. 3nodding I also love knitting and crocheting and trying my hand at new dishes to cook

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Aina Song Report | 10/05/2010 11:52 am: ur very welcome. i hope it comes to good use. good luck!
Aina Song Report | 10/05/2010 5:26 am: ur inuyasha fanfic, which u posted on forums, could use some work. u made several grammatical errors, and u couldn't hold my interest as a reader. i dont say these things to put u down -- on the contrary, im a writer myself (though i post on fanfiction.net) and i know the value of constructive criticism. im fairly certain u have the potential to improve urself, especially of this was a first attempt. please dont stop writing, if its what u want to do, and may i suggest taking a few english and grammar classes? i took an extre-cirriculum, such as a creative writing club, and i cant tell u how its encouraged me. a theatre-based class, such as one focusing on shakespeare, could come in handy as well. all these will be available in high school, or in college, especially if ur striving to majorly in literature.