AboutTHESE AVI'S WITH STORY WRITTEN TO THEM ARE MY OWN CREATION
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NEW AVIS W/ STORIES BY ME! (total made so far!: 6)
Collette was born into a nobel family with two older brothers. Her mother died when she was six from tuberculosis. The year is 1534 and her family and their town are being threatened by the oncoming war. Her father wishes Collette to leave although she wishes to stay with her family and her friends she has known since birth. On her sixteenth birthday, her father sends her to the other side of the country of Roxen to live with a friend of his. She goes there and doesn't understand why her father would take her from the thriving town of Luxen, and send her to the falling apart town of Roxen. She slowly starts to see what true life is like and learns of human weakness. Meanwhile, as the war goes begins, Collette worries for her father's and brother's safety. She writes to them as often as she can, trying to make them go back to safety, before she is left alone in the world.
The only thing Tammy has ever know is dance. She can move her body unlike anyone she knows, or at least that what her teaches tell her. So it's no suprise when the new male dancer, Zale, shows up and takes her spot light that she becomes jealous. She isolates him, trying to win back to spot light and her rightful place as top dancer back. But when she meets Porter, she starts to slack off for once in her life, not caring for once in she's perfect. When her audition comes to get into the school she dreams of, she realizes she much chose between breathing, living and being dance, or the life that Porter has showed her, the life she's dreamed off but knew she couldn't have.
Robin is a new angel, being created no more than sixteen years ago, barely any experience compared to the other angels. Before she knows it, she finds herself in thrown into battle for a war against all of Hell. Quickly she must learn to defend herself from the harmful claws of demons and dark creatures. When one battle ends, another always soon begins. She is often given the job of watchman. One night, as she is patroling the forest between the Kingdom of Heaven and the Fiery Pits of Hell, she sees someone or more likely something. When she goes to inspect the thing, she realizes it's a demon, Lae, but she doens't understand how he can be so close to Heaven and not burning from pain of the light. Then she realizes he's injured and knocked out. She struggles to decide whether to help him or not, and she is overcome with an emotion she knows nothing of when she sees his face. The one thing they didn't prepare her for in training: love.
Heather has been fighting for her life since she was born. She has powers everyone knows about. And they fear her for it. She was mixed with animal DNA so she has animal instinicts and killer intentions. At least that is what they say. She has believed it all her life and isolated herself from human society. It's only when her companion Bayo, the wolf, convinces her to go back to civilization. Surely they couldn't notice her by now? Expect her eyes gave her away. She wanders into town anyway and she is instantly noted of and the town screams in terror. She fleas but with the Kingdom hot on her trail. She believes she has the advantage, knowing the forest, but they have horses so she tries to run faster, crashing into the river. She loses her balance and is swept away by the current. She's rescued by a stranger, someone who looks around her age. She can see he's been isolated from society as well. Then she must decide whether or not she can trust him. Her life may depend on it.
***Bayo the wolf was not supposed to be close to Beowulf. I only just realized it now as I was reading though it.
Isabel, also known as Izzy, has never known her real parents. She now lives with her foster family but she can't help feeling like she doesn't belong there. Her mind becomes filled with emotions, mostly of anger at her real parents. She tries different ways to release her anger without hurting those she cares about. After several trial and error processes, she finds one: cutting. She starts to wear long sleeves so no one will discover her secret. If someone notices it by some chance, she knows she can just lie right on the spot. It isn't until Derek, her best friend, knows somethings up. While her friend is suspicious, she knows that cutting won't last forever. She knows to be able to release her anger out on the source. Her parents. And their coming back.
(this have no avi yet, but I wanted to write the story down anyway.)
Mark has watched Vallery since she was born. He has to; he's her guardian angel. He knows everything about her and her life. He knows the pain she's gone through but he also knows the happiness. He's troubled though, when one day, she can see him. And so can everyone else. He doesn't understand what's going on. He tries to contact the Higher Angels, but he can't reach them. Then he notices his wings are gone and just when he needs them most. Vallery is in serious danger with the demons growing powerful. Mark has to find a way to save Vallery, the girl he knows so well and could possibly love, in his human form. But saving her could be the end of him because if he dies, he may not be able to come back...
******ALL CHARACTERS NAMES ARE SUBJECT TO CHANGE. Maybe.
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