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Report | 10/19/2012 10:32 pm

pam_pam

I love you...
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Report | 10/19/2012 3:22 pm

pam_pam

You are sooo beautiful!
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Report | 10/17/2012 2:49 pm

Yutora

I had no clue what to name it,
so I just named it Stain the Manor red xDD


Once I get home, you'll have it in a PM (:
The full edited version.
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Report | 10/17/2012 1:09 pm

jadamysticmoon

Your very welcome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yutora's avatar

Report | 10/17/2012 7:20 am

Yutora

Whaa. . . I told you, you didn't have to pay me!
Thank you though <3 I appreciate it c:
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Report | 10/17/2012 6:33 am

Yutora

Would you like me to send you the full edited Version now?! With all the italics and such as well - that I was too lazy to add when sending you the un-edited version, lol.

Glad you couldn't guess it! And, of course, that you enjoyed it.
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Report | 10/16/2012 3:24 pm

Yutora

Wonderful! You don't know who it is <3

My beta testers got it wrong as well, haha.
So I guess the clues aren't as obvious biggrin
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Report | 10/16/2012 11:03 am

jadamysticmoon

A very lovely avi!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Report | 10/16/2012 10:02 am

Yutora

You're very welcome! I am just happy you did choose me!
It was a nice challenge, new genre for me to write as well.

I will PM you up 'til 6 now, I am going through the editing
after I sent it out, 'cause I got to go right now, lol.
But it will be edited before you get 7.
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Report | 10/15/2012 8:31 pm

Yutora

Its done (:

I left an open ending, because I was lost as to what to write after the confession of the murderer. Is that okay? I tried keeping each chapter around 1k words, thus it adding up to 6k lol. Chapter 7 has the confession, I decided its best to let tehm think and just have a chapter with who confessed~ I'll see what to delete to make it shorter though then. . . without taking too much away, lol. I hope the killer isn't too obvious.

And idk, never been paid to write one. . . lol. I only enter contests, never had a request. But yeah, you don't really have to pay me.
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Report | 10/15/2012 6:44 pm

Yutora

Chapters up to 5 are done;
if you want them sent just tell me (:

Six will be a bit shorter and then that's it. . .
Unless I actually throw the name of the killer in chapter 7;
which would only be about 500 words then. . .

This entire thing is about 6k as of now. . .
Is that too long?! Should I cut things out?
Yutora's avatar

Report | 10/14/2012 2:28 pm

Yutora

Haha, thanks.

It makes me happy that you think so.
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Report | 10/13/2012 12:22 pm

Yutora

Funny thing is I wasn't all that good with my english grades, lol.
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Report | 10/12/2012 10:16 am

Yutora

I do too ><


And lol, I am trying to wrap it up c__c
Told you I could stretch it longer xD
But now to finding a way to end it!
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Report | 10/11/2012 4:49 pm

Yutora

She got away with something with her shoulder, which will hurt for another 3 months and a broken nose ;c Her operation is on the 16th I think. And our friend got away with two black eyes ><


And I hope they meet your quota c; Four isn't done, since I changed where 3 ends.
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Report | 10/11/2012 2:55 pm

Yutora

Nya crap.

I switched it up when chapter 4 starts.

Ah, well you will see once I give you the full version.
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Report | 10/11/2012 2:52 pm

Yutora

sending three and four in a PM now.

Feedback c: ?
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Report | 10/11/2012 12:43 pm

Yutora

Nya, stuck on three.

I took a pause too. Good reason:
My sister got robbed, beat the s**t out of her and our friend as well. So I was a bit occupied.

I promise to be on it again in the morrow; forgive me? I promise to really have it done by the 20th!
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Report | 10/07/2012 11:53 am

pam_pam

heart

I love you!
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Report | 10/02/2012 10:00 am

Yutora

If swearing is not allowed, tell me now xD
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