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DestinyDivine Report | 12/17/2012 7:12 am

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savvycrazy Report | 02/21/2012 7:41 pm

Nice story! you might want to work on ur grammer+ spelling though dear.... cool blaugh rofl 4laugh

Sunlite Orangegirl Report | 02/19/2012 8:46 pm

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Sunlite Orangegirl Report | 02/14/2012 1:12 pm

whats up howl?? its been awhile!! hope everything is good, ttyl!

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 Honey wake up it is almost 8:30 you are going to be late for your first day of collage maxes mother Victoria yelled from the kitchen. 


  Mom stop yelling, max replied with a sleepy voice.


   Why did you stay up, Victoria ride asked with a concerned voice? Is everything going to be all right?


  No… yes …maybe… I don’t know, max replied. It is just I thought I saw fang yesterday while we were at the library I look across the street and said to myself that cannot be I him and smile just than the bus went by and when it passed he vanished. Max continued mom I thought fang was in Africa with his family. 


 Her mother turned around and asked are you sheer it was he.


   Yes I am sheer it was fang mom max said with some curiosity. 


 Ok you better go before you are late Victoria replied.


Three long driving hours later Max got in to her new room and met her new roommates Kristina, Natasha, and Victoria Benson. A week later max was get into her locker when a envelope with her name on it in fangs handwriting








Dear max,








      I know it been a while since I last saw and spoke with you. Our last encounter with each other did not end up well, I am sorry I ever hurt your family and you. It is just that I have had two rough times with my family. I have been in Africa for the last 4 years you are probably wondering why I am writing you this letter, I am writing this letter to explain why I have not written any other letter to you. Well for started I haven’t been writing because my family and I have been underground for the last 2 years in hiding. This is because my uncle got in trouble with the wrong people, he worked for them a while about one and a half years. When he tied to get out of the group they threatened him with our lives so he hid us so we would be safe. 6 months later we found out that he was killed on that day. I have gotten in touch with good people and rebelled against the people that shot my uncle. About 3 months ago we had learned that the guys who killed my uncle switched targets instead of going after my family they went after yours. I am sorry to say this but your mother and father was killed 3 days ago outside a restraint in California. I know this must be rough for you but it is the truth I would never lie to you. Next time when Victoria asks you to a party say yes!  I will meet you on the dance floor and explain everything else because it is not safe for me to talk to you out in the open. Max you looked said when you where outside of the library, I wish I could have come over to talk to you but I could not jeopardize my mission.








Always your  


                         Fang

















 As max read the letter all she could fell was frustration, happiness, and excitement also when she read about her mothers and fathers death her hand started to quiver. She could no longer held in the emotions and burst out crying with tears streaming down she cheeks. She ran into the bathroom stall locking her in and stayed there crying for the rest of the day. At the end of the last bell she went to the library to grab a few books still slightly sobbing. She started back to her dorm but ran into Victoria and Victoria saw that she was sobbing so Victoria asked her to a party trying to get off of what she was crying about. After having a sudden flashback of the letter she said yes. Once max got back to the dorm she just flopped onto her bed and cried harder. Once it was time to leave for the party, Kristina call Victoria to tell her that she is outside, Victoria banged on max’s door telling her it time to go. As they got outside both of their jaws dropped because Kristina was in a 1965 mustang. All Victoria could ask was where in the hell did you get that! Kristina said that I browed if from a prostitute also known as my dad and my striper for a mother. My dad and mother will ******** me if I get a scratch, dent, 

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