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Report | 07/22/2011 3:28 pm

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Susan, i hate to drop stuff on you especially when you are more likely than not busy, but I got no one else to turn to for this that's bugging me. 


Normally for other people these are practically meaningless, but for me its meaningful. Its about dreams. I don't regularly have dreams and over the past two nights I've had dreams that are really bothering me. Some I can barely remember them now, and some have people I know, and some don't have any people I know at all.

I guess I'll start with this one.

I save this girl from this guy, the girl's name is Christine, (an ex of mine) she wants me to stay with her and I guess in short words, begin a new. I told her I couldn't stay because I was a monster, a force of destruction, that I couldn't be with anyone. Anyone who came in contact with me would feel nothing but pain being with me, and that's nothing I wanted for anyone. She said she could still see the good in me, and I told her it didn't make a difference at all, I would still hurt her. I was also wearing this dark like red suit, that I think was fused with my skin.

Another dream involved another person I knew, it was Britney, this dream with her i don't remember it all to well, I don't think I remember anything at all. Probably all I remember is, "stay here and I'll come back for you, it's too dangerous right now," I think she said that, or I think i said that, I think it was her.

this other dream i had involved Kuzco, (from the Emeperor's new groove) at first we were following these pac man pellets on the ground that sort of magically appeared. We were walking in this jungle like place with a good clearing of the sky. 75 pellets showed up, and that's it, that number was somehow displayed in my vision, like my eyesight, the number was smackdab on the top right hand corner. Then afterwards Kuzco wanted to go back to his palace, and he said all we needed to do was go up. I told him that he was wrong, that we needed to go north. Well first we needed to turn back, make a left and head straight, and we would end up heading north going towards his palace. That and I could also see his palace, and i knew it was north since somehow I could see a display of a compass in my eyesight. (weird I know)

This other dream I had involved me going to this middle school, high school, college campus like place. It was weird. I think i was going to class, everything was black and white for a duration of time. I ended up going to class (by this point my area was no longer one of those black and white movies), I think I told a joke and made the people in the class laugh, I left, I went to the bathroom, I did my business there, washed my hands and strangely enough, this girl comes in, she was tall, black, and for some reason, we started dancing. I felt, strangely enough, really happy, we were intimately close to each other, to the point where I think we kissed, ad afterwards I left the bathroom. I started to make towards the entrance/exit of the place. Then this guy, bald, Mexican like guy with a goatee, gets in my way, and starts pushing me. I try to defend myself but he easily tosses me over his back, almost like i didn't weight anything. I then did the only thin that came to my mind. I started yelling for help. Strangely enough, people came to my aid, one person I recognized was someone from High School, everyone else was too vague to remember.Still even more stranger was the fact that everyone froze, and no one was moving. Then i heard saying that I did good asking for help....and that's all i remember for that one.

Another dream i had was this one where I ended up taking these two girls in a green like car, I think the license plate had the numbers 79 at the end. The car had 8 seats. 2 front, 2 middle, 2 in the back. For some reason the girls I was taking in my car ha dogs, one was black and the other was white. The dogs tried to bite me, but were unable to do so, they were unable to get up front in the front seats for some
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Report | 07/03/2011 9:22 am

Thunderboltx

If I told you, it wouldn't be a secret, now would it? :p I actually prefer clouds versus the sun believe it or not, I can't stand the head, the heat of the sun was never for me. I look forward to the cloudy skies though that's just a myth, Washington isn't always covered in clouds, is it?

I've actually slowed down a bit, mostly because I've diverged into writing bits of the other stories. I actually wrote a portion of the last storyish, well not last story, but the big one....and when i think about it, and the action that occurs, the words, exchanged, the rising challenge, the tragedy, etc etc, and I picture making a flash video about it, its just astonishing, its just simply breath taking (for me at least) and each time I imagine it, it gets better and better. mrgreen Though I will try to stay focused on the main story at hand...though it will be hard considering the last one hold a lot of truth, secrets, betrayals, sacrifices, happy and sad endings....so much.....haha. rofl

Well, okay, but not to poke at the leg comment, but the thingy on your status said something else. Still, I don't doubt what I said, regardless of scars, or anything else, the person on the inside, makes those scars vanish completely, what are scars compared to the wonderful person to whom I am speaking to. blaugh
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Report | 06/29/2011 5:22 pm

Thunderboltx

I wanted to tell you, given that I've leaked bits of its to some people in my life, but I intend to go to Washington to work in some different areas to broaden my horizons. I wanted to tell you because, well, I find you an important person in my life, and someone who should know. I'll be doing a variety of work, but work will be work. Aside from that, I really want to know more of what's out there. That, and other small events here have foreshadowed that for me. (its a secret hee hee hee)

Aside from that, I'e reached 160 pages on my story as of now. mad p

(btw, I read the status thingy, Susan, pretty legs is in the eye of the beholder. Despite scars, bruises, excess fat/muscle, I'm willing to bet I would still find them pretty, but I"m guessing you want to see them as pretty from your perspective, but just letting you know, even though i haven't seen them, I would find them pretty no matter what, its the person inside that counts, and that person reflects the beauty on the outside, so no matter what, you are pretty everywhere. ^^ )
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Report | 06/16/2011 11:43 am

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Well then I guess you'll have plenty to look forward to when she gets back, so yeah, you have that to look forward to and on top of that, you are working on painting rooms, right? So 2 weeks will go come and go like I said earlier. ^^
Then I hope the clouds decide to take a vacation and move east, though then again, i do feel sorry for the eastern folk that have to look to the clouds every morning, unless its something they really enjoy. 3nodding Somehow I don't see how baking your body into a crisp is the most suitable option. mad p

I suppose, though she was the person who was reading my story, and I was so excited to hear good things about my story. Now, well I guess I wont hear more about my story from her.
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Report | 06/15/2011 5:04 pm

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Good to hear that you are diligently carrying through with your work, I'm glad to hear that you're pushing on ahead. Your friend is coming back after those two weeks though right, I mean two weeks will come and go. I'd say the cloudy weather is better than the hot weather, after all, summer this time around will be a lot more hotter than before. Ooooh, you make me jealous of your current location. We don't get snow around these part, except the mountain areas, and even then, it has to be really cold weather around here, which will be less likely now that summer heat is here.

I wish I could I've had better days...Its bad enough I lost Britney, but now I lost a friend as well, a really good friend...I said something that made her think badly of me, and I wanted to take it back, but its too late, I tried to say everything that I felt was right, and would convince her that her friendship means too much for me to continue my life without it....now.....its harder to look at things positively in life when I feel like I'm being tested...and all these tests....I'm failing them..... I lost Britney, and now I lost my friend Laura....I don't want to lose anymore people in my life, I did enough of that several years ago....I don't need anymore of that now.
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Report | 06/14/2011 4:56 pm

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I know, and like I said, take your time. My friend said I was going to fast, so I am anxious and thrilled to hear what you'll have to say. ^^ She said she liked my story so far, so whatever you have to say on your part, I'll highly consider it. Take it easy Susan, hope you are enjoying your summer so far. ^^ (and of course like I said once and I'll say it again, read when you feel like you want to. ^^ ) mrgreen
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Report | 06/13/2011 1:45 pm

Thunderboltx

I sent my story, just letting you know. ^^
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Report | 06/08/2011 12:45 pm

Thunderboltx

So, I'm ready to send it any time you are ready to send me an email address. xd

Like I said, I don;'t expect an immediate response and corrections, take your time, my story isn't near completion. xp
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Report | 05/31/2011 12:49 pm

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Alright. I don't think i have that version of word. So I would say highlight changes. I would appreciate reading and changing every bit of error you can find. I look at my work and see no errors, but i am sure there are multiple mistakes that I can't spot. Thank you for offering to look over this Susan, it means a lot. ^^
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Report | 05/30/2011 12:18 pm

Thunderboltx

I would prefer through an email attachment, since its pretty huge for only a few pages, but then again I might be exaggerating. sweatdrop
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Report | 05/30/2011 11:47 am

Thunderboltx

So how shall I send you a copy of my latest work? mad p
I'm actually anxious for you to look over it and what you have to say. blaugh
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Report | 05/25/2011 3:16 pm

Thunderboltx

Well, I know that there will be rare moments where you will juggle the ball, but I mean maybe before tournaments or matches, that might be the only time when you do it. mad p I suppose, though I only said that because I distinctly remember soccer players back in my high school practice with a hacky sack. Still, what would I know, I'm not the soccer play, you are. ^^ Now, I may not be the most grammatically smart person alive, but I am sure lightninging isn't the correct term. hehe. wink

Boy did I have the wrong idea, what would I do without you Susan? (if someone asked me what passive writing was, I would be clueless and dumbfounded) sweatdrop I can say that my writing had elements of passive writing before I went through and revised it, adding more detail, description, action. Still I can only add so much action from my main character given that he can't speak. So here is my question to you, my story can it have some passive writing, or it has to be completely swept of it in any form it may be? I only ask because as we both know, I am new to all this. That and there are so many rules that I might end up breaking, or currently breaking, while writing my story.
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Report | 05/24/2011 4:41 pm

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Lol thank you. Did you see my little lamb? lol
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Report | 05/24/2011 11:56 am

Thunderboltx

However, you play soccer at a much greater success than I do, and with that added, it increases your chances at juggling the ball. You've tried the hacky-sack routine, right? I'm not sure if that helps, but, hey, you never know? mad p

Really, thank you Susan. blaugh Hee hee, I am sure you are looking forward to aiding my broken grammar. mad p By passive you mean where the language jumps between present and past tense, right? (I am not good in the english/writing department and yet look at me, trying to write a story. xd ) Either way, I know you have precise grammatical skills. I'll try to finish up some more on my story, and I look forward to everything you have to offer. wink
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Report | 05/23/2011 1:10 pm

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Yeah. I hope I find my answer at the end of these stories. I talked about this with another friend, and I don't know how it turned out, but it turned out into a deep discussion about at the end of writing these stories....I might find out who I am meant to be.... or something like that.

Well, I hope that turns out exceptionally superb for you. The only place I've been to is Mexico, Oaxaca, and that's my parents home state. Still, wow, you are going far, all I can say is, please come back safely, I want you to read my book when its done. ^^ Good to know that you'll have friends around to hang around with, can't imagine the days without them.

I've drawn two separate picture compilations. The 5 original heroes and the 5 other heroes. I"ll show them to you, I don't suppose you'll consider accepting them through email? (I don't want my work to be stolen through the internet, haha xp ) I'll try to avoid that, it wont come to that, well, not any time soon, like, I mean, I have to finish the original 10, the final one and other side part areas....that I should really keep to myself if I want my stories to remain interesting, hehe. mad p Again with the fresh air comments that deal with California, you will never stop will you? mad p Yeah the rain has been semi disastrous here, but still to some degree it may have caused damaged here and there. Sorry to hear about your neighbor and his chickens. Well, running, or anything else is good, so long as it works up a sweat. mad p OOhh, i wish I could juggle a soccer ball, I am hopeless if I try. ^^; Well I don't suppose you want to read some of my story? Its not fully complete, but I've let my friend who guided me in that direction to read some of it, well she hasn't gotten around to it, but she will get to it today, for the time being yeah, its still something, to me at least. blaugh
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Report | 05/21/2011 1:44 pm

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Thank you. No, not in any way or form is it autobiographical. I guess along some lines the character is a lot like me. However, this character is but one of 10, all whom I share some qualities, at the most maybe 1 from each of the 10. I hope to finish my first one, I feel this is my calling, something I should do first above all else, its hard to explain, but I'm glad I'm doing it, it actually makes me feel happy.

Wow, I have to hand it to you Susan. If anyone can take a challenge and face it head on, its you. You are indeed a strong willed person. ^^ Good to know your classes provided more outside freedom for you to participate in. Nice, keeping in touch with them, so are you looking forward to next year? I've actually stumbled on my running, stopped for a week and just this past week I did one full hour and it nearly depleted me and left me sore or a few days. On top of that it rained on some of the days here, and aside from the rain, some days were blazing with heat. It's hard to tell which of the days are going to be cloudy and cool so I run warm and snugged enough (for a runner) and hot and sizzling so I wear light open, free clothing, (like no sweat pants or a sweater etc etc. x]) Still I don't intend to give up, this week I intend to get back to my running, but it will be hard to manage that and write my story. Apart from writing my story, I have attempted drawing what my characters look like. Of the 10, I've managed to draw 5, and I have 5 more to work on. On top of that I want to draw some other characters and creatures I have featured in my story. So much to do, and now if only my drawing skills were flawless, its not to say that my attempt at drawing was poorly, but I wish I could have added more detail to my characters.

Yeah, and now I've gone on so much about what I'm doing, going to do, and attempting to do, I think I might make your eyes pop out from their sockets. xp
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Report | 05/20/2011 11:31 am

Thunderboltx

I promise, I won't leave, it was wrong to leave in the first place all because of one person that doesn't even care.
Well, it's not exactly that i'm leaving, just I really will be busier. Over the past I've started writing a story. I've covered up to 65 pages in counting. It's about this forgotten hero that has been lost to the past. Aside from that, its only one book/story I'm writing of 9 more, and they eventually join forces in one book to face a threatening force. I'm going to love once I get to that book/story, but for the time being, I'm writing this story first. Which brings me to another point, the name of my story is called Relik, the Silent Hero.
I hope it comes along strongly, I mean I might intend to get it published, and who knows, people might actually like it. Although I don't expect everyone to like it, I do intend to write everything I can to share who this hero was, and how his tragedy is not something to take likely. Haha, all this talk and I think I just sound like a tv commercial of some sort.

How have you been Susan, I trust you have been pulling through college strongly and persevering as ever? mrgreen
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Report | 05/04/2011 4:16 am

BrokenHearted Asian

oh, by the "does this happen anytime", burning_eyes i meant if anyone combusted because of teh extreme heat at your end ninja
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Report | 05/04/2011 4:14 am

BrokenHearted Asian

but dont you usually have to read Shakespeare for most of your high-school English curriculum?
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Report | 05/02/2011 4:37 am

BrokenHearted Asian

burning_eyes this this happen anytime? 3nodding
so, what kind of books do you read?
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