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Am I dead?
Have I died and flown or sank?
I can’t tell you… I don’t know.
But I feel the words flow,
And I can’t say if I’ve reached
Heaven or gone to Hell,
But I know that I feel this… well…
Am I in Paradise or Elysium?
I can’t tell the difference from seein’ ‘em,
And to be honest I can’t display
The care I did for you that day
For if I did, if I yelled
I know that I’d end up in Hell.
Am I in that place for heroes’ rest,
The place of light meant for the best
Where come the knights and heroes left
In Death’s throes, am I hence?
I wish I knew the fact of my tale,
That I understood what came so pale
And grazed ‘pon me with a smile
Telling me to stay awhile,
Filling me with the same fire, same light
As filled my heart when – that night
I saw your eyes burn like the moon
And surely fell, surely swooned
At the vision before my mind
That I can never quite combine
Words together to comprehend…
With thoughts of you, I’m in Heaven.

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Royal Murderer

Report | 08/28/2013 7:36 pm

Royal Murderer

See ya later! blaugh
Royal Murderer

Report | 08/28/2013 7:12 pm

Royal Murderer

Ill make a mental note ouo heart I might invite some people over to watch movies and do math ouo
Royal Murderer

Report | 08/28/2013 7:07 pm

Royal Murderer

Sure o: I'll probably be home all day, so ill have wi-fi
Royal Murderer

Report | 08/27/2013 4:20 pm

Royal Murderer

Or we can skype or somethinggg
Royal Murderer

Report | 08/26/2013 7:10 pm

Royal Murderer

I miss you
AHHHHHHHHHHHhhhhHH heart
Royal Murderer

Report | 08/25/2013 9:16 am

Royal Murderer

Duuuuuuuuuudeeee we were playing internet rpgsssssss
I seriously kid you not.
Royal Murderer

Report | 08/24/2013 10:01 pm

Royal Murderer

I had a dream o:
And you were in it yooooooo
PrincessRayvine

Report | 07/14/2013 2:09 pm

PrincessRayvine

What a wonderful poem love! smile I wish my writing could be as illustrious as yours.
Dinrelle

Report | 05/26/2013 7:29 pm

Dinrelle

No omg don't you even start.
I am in no way majestic I'm more of drab and blah.
By far you are truly beyond majestic.
Thank you for being my friend even though I haven't been much of one.
I really hope it will be the easiest.
Thanks you again.
Always having a way with words, keep it that way.
:3
Dinrelle

Report | 05/25/2013 8:15 am

Dinrelle

Oh my goodness,
Congratulations on Graduating!!!
You freaking made it!!
I'm sorry I'm terribly late, but I'm so happy for you.
I have another year left, wish me luck, aye
.
And Good luck to you, cheers!