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Millie elemental princess 12/11/2009 7:47 am

Kingdom Hearts Fanfic


I wake up looking around. Thinking about what I need to do today. I wandered through Hollow Bastion. How old I am..... thirteen I think. I saw people but didn't bother to talk to them. I sat and waited to see if they would notice me. No one did. A black creature came up trying to scratch me with it's claws.
"What Did I do to you!?! Mean little thing!" I shout copying it's movements.
A boy with brown spikey hair, a duck wearing no pants, and a skinny dog-person with a funny looking hat hit the thing and it dissapears. A pink heart flies up in the air and vanishes.
"Are you OK?" Asks the boy.
" Im fine. That thing would give up after I bit it anyway." Chomps my teeth. " Who are you? Im.... Actually... I don't know who I am." I say looking down.
Im Sora. This is Donald. And this is Goofy. You say you can't remember your name?" He asks me.
I nod.
"What was that thing that attacked me?" I ask. "And why did a heart fly into the sky when it dissapeared?"
"Well, I don't know about the heart, but that was a heartless. Someone who lets their heart Fill with hatred and darkness, they turn into a heartless." Sora says.
Suddenly I feel a weird presence. I turn around to see another Heartless. Sora hits it with a giant key a few times and it slips over and stands in front of me. It seems like.... It's maybe part of me? It disapears and I gasp noticing I was holding my breath. I scearch my dress for anyting. ID? Wallet... anything. I find a pen. I click it so I can write something. It turns into a staff. A deangerous looking staff.... The top has a cresent moon and a star inside. I look closely and see It's a removeable ninja star. The moon can act as a scythe or a boomerang. at the bottom of it there is a big spiked ball made out of steel. A skinny grey thing appears and I slice it with my staff and it retreats, but Sora gets it.
" That was a nobody. I don't know much about them..." Sora says.
" Are there human-like forms of heartless, or nobodys?" I ask
" Of course not!" Sora replies.
" Whatcha' got there?" Goofy asks looking at the staff.
" I clicked a pen and this staff appeared. It's kool!" I say jumping in the air.
" Do you think you'd wanna help fight heartless and nobodies?" Donald says.
" Sure. No harm if there not helping anyone." I say. " But im gonna head off to diffrent places... Can you take me to a place called... Twilight town?"
" Sure." Sora Says. "Goofy, Donald went we just about to go there?" He whispers to them.
Then nod. They lead me to a weird looking space ship.
" This is a Gummy ship.. It'll tak us to Twilight town, A-Yuck" Goofy says helping me in.
" Thanks." I say sitting down.
The way there I didn't feel like talking.
"When do you think we'll see Rkiu and Kairi again?" Sora asked when we got there.
Donald and goofy shrugged. They let me off and I started walking. I see this group of kids my age hitting eachother with toy swords? There's a banner that reads "Struggle Tournament Don't Miss It!". A game... hitting people is a game.... fun... I see a skate board.... I jump on it and immedatly fall. I forgot... I suck at balancing!!! I hear laughter and look up to see a girl with an EMO face, a big boy with a tank top on, and another guy with a beanie on and a belly shirt.
" Why did you fall? You some kinda loser?" The boy asks.
" Im not good at balancing. Jerk..." I say dusting myself off.
" Seifer not a jerk! Ya know!?" The big guy says.
" One. Yeah, he is. Two, I don't know but I Probably know more then you do. Your annoying." I say Starting to walk away.
"Hey! Fight me in struggle." Seifer says.
" No. Struggle seems stupid and, someone could get hurt." I say continuing to walk away.
" Is the rose afraid to get hurt?! Hahahahahahahahahahaha! And whats with her red eyes? Is she High or somthing?" Seifer says snickering.
I turn at him nearly on fire. I pick up one of the toy swords and hit him.
" BRING IT ON YOU ******** MANWHORE!!!!!" I say hitting him again.
He picks up his sword thing and starts trying to hit me. I start hitting him out of anger until he falls. I set down the stupid toy and walk away.
"Never talk about my eyes. Ever." I say and I walk away with Them yelling at me.

i_ish_cuddles 12/11/2009 5:32 am

xP
i dont think you barfed all over your room
nao did you

TheKirbyMaster 12/10/2009 8:45 pm

He isnt ^-^ I WOULD KNOW

i_ish_cuddles 12/10/2009 7:56 pm

Blehhhh stopppp i dun wanna think about food......
ive been sick DX

sonicxwinx 12/10/2009 5:43 pm

O it's fine I like to listen to people =) and you don't have to donate to me if your questing it's okay =D

Angels Blessing 1067 12/10/2009 5:38 pm

Ok see ya!

PunkHuynhLova 12/10/2009 5:35 pm

Hello? -peek-

PunkHuynhLova 12/10/2009 5:28 pm

She felt in a happy / giving mood. I also have Mister Rufus. I don't reallly want it. I'll give it to her ^^

Millie elemental princess 12/10/2009 5:20 pm

lifes ok. Hey wanna read my KH2 fanfic?

Angels Blessing 1067 12/10/2009 5:20 pm

confusing anybody is not nice xD
but only if u do it on purpose...if its not intentional, then its fine
oh my gosh mimi i bought an awesome christmas hat. i have to show it to u 2morrow xDDD
ur gonna laugh i can tell lol
my mom bought it for me and yeah its soooo cute<3
and crazy xD