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EthanSkye Report | 09/25/2011 11:22 am

Thanks. And no problem just thought that was great advice, a really awesome constructive critique

KingBet Report | 01/14/2011 9:29 am

hey there
I was wondering if you would be interested in looking at a new poem I made.
Your analysis of my other poem was good, and I would love to have your opinion.

^.^

KingBet Report | 11/08/2010 11:09 am

I understand
and that's why I wanted to thank you
3nodding

KingBet Report | 11/08/2010 10:05 am

It seems as if lots of people are mad at you for criticizing their poems.
I on the other hand am very glad about the things you told me *a long time ago*

I thought I should at least help your day a little by saying that I appreciate your comments, and that by all means you should keep up the good work

This Cat is a Landmine Report | 10/19/2010 8:22 pm

i have to say-
i really ******** hate gaia comments and whatnot, cause it's tiny and awkward and aoifuaw STUFF

can always add me if you're bored on some chatbox s**t (msn skype w/e). nobody is awake right now but me.

This Cat is a Landmine Report | 10/19/2010 8:14 pm

maaan, you get either a lot of hate or too much love.

here's some in-between: yo.

Splediferous Masochism Report | 10/16/2010 6:50 am

heart heart heart heart heart

Splediferous Masochism Report | 10/16/2010 5:34 am

*loves on all your Doors references lately* You're the first to get that I was named for Jim Morrison without me having to explain. heart heart

xXxShadowOfYesterdayxXx Report | 10/13/2010 6:15 pm

then lets discuss shall we. my poem sucks becasue it has no feeling. it is immature and stirs nothing in a person. im tired of talking bad about my poem. i'll do it though becasue its what you want.

the first part rhymed horribly (if you can call it a rhyme)

the last part was ended by an old lady running off with sexy penguins. what more can i say about that? obviously that was an epic fail write there. the words used to rhyme with were everyday words that a 3rd grader could use. anybody could do what i did. except everybody could do it better. thats what you were looking for correct?

xXxShadowOfYesterdayxXx Report | 10/13/2010 5:48 pm

lets not fight. i hate fighting. it makes me bitchy. haha anyway i felt that writing about david bowie and penguins deserved a poem that was stupid. i agree it was stupid but that not how i write. like i said i wanted it to be because of how i felt about what we had to put in the poem. i can write. i love to write. if you think that i cant write just becasue i was goofing around on ONE poem then you are seriously mistaken.