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song lyrics, poems, thoughts, rambles, babbles, essays, letters, words, ideas, brainstorms, exercises, challenges, and on and on....

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[something,somewhere]

i'm still searching
for that splinter cell
splicing my fingernails;

but it's hard building
concentration camps
inside my brain;

when i've mastered
that nirvana spirituality
that i've experienced

before, i shall
never return.

"But I, being poor, have only my dreams;
I have spread my dreams under your feet;
Tread softly because you tread on my dreams"
-- W. B. Yeats

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Starro Star Report | 04/23/2013 5:03 am
Starro Star
And another thing. I said I was a writer not a poet. I write stories. Those were my first poem mind you. I'm trying out all forms of writing to better improve myself as a writer.
Starro Star Report | 04/23/2013 4:49 am
Starro Star
Eh? I didn't mean that at all. I'm no worshipper of my own words? I just don't like changing the words I have because they're mine. You're pulling too deep of meanings out of words. Words being my belief is because they are my own. Please don't try to misunderstand. PM me if there are any questions about anything I said. Sorry for the confusion.
Starro Star Report | 04/23/2013 4:00 am
Starro Star
Thank you for rating my poem. It is nice to know how people feel about certain writing styles. I will take into consideration on what you have said. Whether it changes my view on my work or not, it doesn't matter. When I write my words as a writer, I stay true to them. They are my belief and my life. No matter what others say. Thank you for your input.
EthanSkye Report | 09/25/2011 11:22 am
EthanSkye
Thanks. And no problem just thought that was great advice, a really awesome constructive critique
KingBet Report | 01/14/2011 9:29 am
KingBet
hey there
I was wondering if you would be interested in looking at a new poem I made.
Your analysis of my other poem was good, and I would love to have your opinion.

^.^
KingBet Report | 11/08/2010 11:09 am
KingBet
I understand
and that's why I wanted to thank you
3nodding
KingBet Report | 11/08/2010 10:05 am
KingBet
It seems as if lots of people are mad at you for criticizing their poems.
I on the other hand am very glad about the things you told me *a long time ago*

I thought I should at least help your day a little by saying that I appreciate your comments, and that by all means you should keep up the good work
This Cat is a Landmine Report | 10/19/2010 8:22 pm
This Cat is a Landmine
i have to say-
i really ******** hate gaia comments and whatnot, cause it's tiny and awkward and aoifuaw STUFF

can always add me if you're bored on some chatbox s**t (msn skype w/e). nobody is awake right now but me.
This Cat is a Landmine Report | 10/19/2010 8:14 pm
This Cat is a Landmine
maaan, you get either a lot of hate or too much love.

here's some in-between: yo.
Splediferous Masochism Report | 10/16/2010 6:50 am
Splediferous Masochism
heart heart heart heart heart
 
 
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