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Kobrokai
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Posted: Fri Jun 17, 2005 @ 08:11pm
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Posted: Sat Oct 30, 2004 @ 05:25am
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roses...new part!
ok, i wrote more...dont know why im posting it. lol. Thank you swatt, for so blatanly saying it sucks. I know your opinion on my writing, thankyouverymuch.
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Something...something stood black against the whiteness in the distance. It stood tall, casting a mighty shadow towards her. Immediately drawn in, she slowly moved one foot in front of the other, sweeping past the white roses. The roses...withered as she walked past them, folding over and falling, leaving a white trail behind her.
As the object came into focus, she noticed that it was marble white, like everything else in the room. The object...was a fountain with a round pool. Water sprouted from the center of the pool, sparkling at it drizzled down back into the pool. It was like a soft rain, ironically sad and beautiful at the same time. Her pace quickened.
The roses started turning to a crimson red. As the transformation took place, she felt her heart skip a beat as the fountain drew closer. Upon inspection, the white marble glittered with red specks. She gasped as she noticed that someone was laid across the front of the fountain. She ran to the person and sat next to them. Taking in a deep breath, she turned over the body...
A high pitched scream burst from her throat. It was his face...his handsome face. A few started to flow from her eyes as she clutched him tighter to her chest. No, not him...anyone but him. Her one true love was gone, deceased. Her shoulders heaved as she looked up and started to scream. Her tears fell like a soft rain, gracing his face with moisture.
As she screamed, the white walls started to fall. Behind the large chunks, black walls appeared. It was so dark and foreboding that no one would ever enter its darkness. It was like a dark night without any light. It was the darkest, strongest black you could ever imagine. And as the walls fell, rose petals flew wildly through the air, turning from a romantic red to a charcoal black. What once seemed like a paradise, is now gone...
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Kobrokai
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Kobrokai
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Posted: Thu Oct 28, 2004 @ 06:32am
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Posted: Tue Oct 26, 2004 @ 08:40pm
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Story of my fake muse
I had to write about how I met my muse. I don't have a muse, so I had to make one up. This sound convincing?
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I find the rain strangely beautiful. There's something about the drops hitting the ground, and the drafty smell it gives my house. It's relaxing...it makes my worries melt away. Late Saturday afternoon I sat in my kitchen and watched the rain slowly drizzle in my backyard. The day itself was quite a disgusting scene--gray clouds hung low in the sky, joining up with a merciless wind. I watched as the multi-colored leaves were tossed around. Most people would have referred to the day as useless--I referred to it as an opportunity to think of the previous week. Some of the leaves were still, while others were tossed around in what seemed to be a violent fury set by the wind. The rain still fell, looking like tiny needles piercing the ground. I don't know why, but the rain seemed depressingly beautiful--that is to say, while most people hate watching rain fall, I love it. That's when she came to me--my muse, my inspiration. She seemed to hover over me, whispering in my ear. She was only a spiritual version of me. My muse...she spoke in beautiful descriptions, and told me to write them down. She told me that the rain...the rain looked like small glass crystals falling from the sky. She told me that like this beautiful rain, everything once horrible would wash away and disappear. After that, she disappeared. Ironically, the rain stopped and a little sun shone through the clouds. This time, the drops clung to the orange and yellow leaves. The sun flowed through them, truly looking like crystals...small fragile crystals...
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Kobrokai
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Kobrokai
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Posted: Thu Oct 21, 2004 @ 08:33pm
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Posted: Wed Oct 20, 2004 @ 04:36am
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Roses...a new scene
I started to write this up...it's not finished yet, but this is what i have so far...if you like it, let me know. wink
In a brilliant flash there were only roses. As she walked through the garden, she felt as if she were in an unattainable Eden. The roses were only of pure white, neither tainted by evil nor lifted by good. They were only the colors of the angels... innocent, but not lost in their own sea.
The flowers themselves were silky smooth. Pleasing to touch, she ran her hands over the soft petals, a small smile dancing on her lips as she moved forward. The roses swayed with her hand, bending as she continued to brush her fingers against the orchids.
Something twitched in her mind...it told her to pick one up to put in her hair. Reaching for the stem, she grasped it and tugged hard. As the rose broke free, she felt a thorn drive into the palm of her hand. Jumping, she let rose float to the ground.
A single drop of salty crimson blood fell against the rose. Slowly, it turned to a light pink, the shade of a woman's lips. Within a few moments, the shade turned into a passionate red...the deepest red a romantic could think of. It almost looked crimson and blood-like before it transformed into a cold black. She was taken back by this sudden transformation. The black rose emitted a cold and evil feeling to her. Soon, the rose itself began to crumble, until it turned into filthy ash, and blew away with an unknown wind.
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Kobrokai
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Kobrokai
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Posted: Sat Oct 16, 2004 @ 05:59am
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Posted: Thu Oct 07, 2004 @ 01:50am
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Wow...first post!
My first post ever! I'm sure no one is going to be reading this, but whatever. I'll probably update this rarely anyway. Oh well!! If you are here, I'll tell ya about myself!
Well, I'm a 16 year old girl, who's getting her liscense THIS SATURDAY! Yes, psyched about that. I live in the US, and that's as close to location that you're gonna get. blaugh Hmm...well, I obviously like anime, or I wouldn't be on gaia. My favorite shows are Cowboy Bebop, Samurai X (Rurouni Kenshin), Excel Saga, Wolf's Rain, .hack//sign, Witch Hunter Robin, Chobits, Dragonball Z, FLCL Gundam Wing, and Trigun! Yeah, I have a lot of favorites. I'm easily entertained. smile I love anime music. My fav. soundtracks are from Cowboy Bebop, FLCL, Wolf's Rain, Trigun, and .hack! I listen to CB, FLCL, and Trigun ALL the time. I unfortunately don't have the .hack soundtrack at all sad If anyone wants to send me the openeing theme to .hack//sign or Last Exile, it would be really really appreciated!! smile Ok, away from the music. I like to write. I have 3 originals at fictionpress.com (wind6 on there...gotta plug myself) and I have 20 dbz fics! I'm wind2 on fanfiction.net. Check em out! Ok...enough of the anime! I like to run run run! I'm a super track star! hehe. I wanna run for UCONN when I get to college. yay!
That's all about me. My life is boring, but whatever. If ya ever wanna talk, IM me! Bye!
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